Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Deferred Draft
The aviators work in the Republic of Cannabeer until an army draft notice interrupts them. Their Buzzard aircraft project temporarily secures a deferral.
Key Events
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Aviators in Cannabeer — The aviators work as pilots known as the Wrong Brothers.
Location: Republic of Cannabeer, P.U.
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Draft Notice Arrives — An army draft notice interrupts the aviators' work.
Location: Republic of Cannabeer, P.U.
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Deferral for the Buzzard — Their military service is deferred because of plans for the new Buzzard aircraft.
Location: Hangar
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Rubber Mishap Begins — Repeated accidents leave one aviator immersed in quick-drying melted rubber.
Location: Hangar
Rubber and Hydrogen Chaos
Attempts to solve the melted-rubber problem repeatedly backfire. Hydrogen, a shotgun, an aerial launch, and a plunge into a well intensify the comic danger.
Key Events
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Hydrogen Solution — Attempts to correct the rubber problem involve hydrogen and create further danger.
Location: Hangar
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Shotgun Escalation — A shotgun is added to the hazardous effort to free the trapped aviator.
Location: Hangar
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Unexpected Aerial Launch — The rubber mishap launches one aviator upward into the air.
Location: Hangar
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Descent into the Well — The airborne aviator descends into a well.
Location: Well
The Buzzard Goes Wrong
The aviators try to move the unwieldy aircraft and later demonstrate it to Sky Aircraft Company representatives. Mechanical failures and errors destroy the demonstration.
Key Events
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Aircraft Extraction Attempt — The aviators attempt to maneuver the unwieldy Buzzard out of its hangar.
Location: Hangar
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Second Skyward Accident — The extraction attempt sends one aviator skyward again.
Location: Hangar
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Return to the Rubber — The airborne aviator falls back into the liquid rubber.
Location: Hangar
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Buzzard Demonstration — The aviators demonstrate the Buzzard to representatives of the Sky Aircraft Company.
Location: Hangar
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Mechanical Failure — Mechanical failures disrupt the aircraft demonstration.
Location: Hangar
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Demonstration Errors — Errors during the demonstration further undermine control of the aircraft.
Location: Hangar
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Loss of Aircraft Control — The aviators lose control of the Buzzard during the demonstration.
Location: Hangar
The Well Disaster
The aviators lose control of the Buzzard and fall into a well. The resulting accident drenches both the aviators and the officials.
Key Events
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Crash into the Well — The aviators and the aircraft fall into a well.
Location: Well
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Officials Drenched — The fall drenches the aviators and the Sky Aircraft Company representatives.
Location: Well
Escape from the Army
The accident places the aviators in the army, where they clash with a tough drill sergeant. They ultimately flee from military service.
Key Events
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Induction into the Army — The accident results in the aviators entering the army.
Location: Army setting
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Drill Sergeant Encounter — The aviators encounter a tough drill sergeant during military service.
Location: Army setting
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Military Discipline Clash — Their service becomes another source of conflict and comic difficulty.
Location: Army setting
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Escape from Service — The aviators finally flee from military service.
Location: Army setting
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Comic Flight from Duty — The story concludes with their escape from the army.
Location: Army setting