Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Weight of the Past
A recollection of work release establishes the constraints Mike experienced. In the present, he works as a locksmith while hoping to repair a strained relationship.
Key Events
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Work Release Recollection — A recollection describes searches, a strict schedule, and wages deducted for accommodation in a work-release program. Characters: Mike
Location: Unspecified
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Mike's Disciplined Routine — Mike works as a locksmith and follows a disciplined routine while carrying the weight of his past. Characters: Mike
Location: Unspecified
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A Strained Relationship — Mike wants to repair an important relationship with a woman he has written to for a long time, but she remains upset with him. Characters: Mike
Location: Unspecified
Margo's Disruptions
Margo involves Mike in her concerns about a man she is watching. Her taking his van puts his work at risk and angers him.
Key Events
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Margo's Request — Margo asks Mike to help observe a man and worries that he may be involved with someone else. Characters: Mike, Margo
Location: Unspecified
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The Van Incident — Margo takes Mike's van, putting his job at risk and leaving him angry about the trouble caused by his effort to help her. Characters: Mike, Margo
Location: Unspecified
Work and Reconciliation
Margo praises Mike to Jimmy and requests a costly lock system for him to install. She also encourages Mike to make a peace offering to the woman he loves.
Key Events
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A Requested Lock System — Margo praises Mike's work to Jimmy and asks for Mike to install an extensive, expensive lock system; Jimmy accepts the job. Characters: Mike, Margo, Jimmy
Location: Unspecified
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A Peace Offering — Margo presses Mike to talk about the woman he loves and encourages him to choose a peace offering. Characters: Mike, Margo
Location: Unspecified
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What Mike Remembers — Mike says the woman enjoys the beach and the color purple, showing how much he remembers about her. Characters: Mike, Margo
Location: Unspecified
Uncertain Conclusions
Talk turns to whether Charles may be having an affair, but the evidence is unclear. Mike receives advice about his own relationship, and the story ends with a tense discussion of a lock's cost.
Key Events
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Uncertain Affair Concerns — Mike and another man discuss whether Charles may be having an affair, but the evidence remains uncertain. Characters: Mike, Charles
Location: Unspecified
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The Unresolved Lock Cost — After advice to stop holding back, Mike reacts defensively and then acknowledges it before returning to a tense encounter about a lock's cost. Characters: Mike
Location: Unspecified