Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Peaceful Holiday Begins
The traveler celebrates Christmas Eve with three children before flying to a remote fishing and camping holiday. The atmosphere is initially calm and domestic.
Key Events
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Tortured Flashback Frame — The story begins with a tortured man reflecting on how he reached the chair.
Location: Torture room
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Christmas Tree Decorating — The traveler decorates a Christmas tree with three children on Christmas Eve.
Location: Home
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Holiday Flight Begins — The traveler flies with an old friend toward a remote fishing and camping area.
Location: Small airplane
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Remote Camping Holiday — The traveler and his old friend spend time fishing and camping in a remote area.
Location: Remote camping area
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Return Flight Starts — The travelers begin flying home on Friday the 13th.
Location: Small airplane
Crash Into Suspicion
The return flight suffers mechanical trouble and ends in a remote crash landing. A farmer's refusal and a truck driver's strange conduct make the journey home increasingly unsettling.
Key Events
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Return Flight Starts — The travelers begin flying home on Friday the 13th.
Location: Small airplane
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Engine Trouble — The plane develops problems while flying back from the holiday.
Location: Small airplane
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Crash Landing — The damaged plane crash-lands in a field in a remote location.
Location: Remote field
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Farmhouse Refusal — Farmer refuses shelter and refuses to let the traveler use the telephone. Characters: Farmer
Location: Farmhouse
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Strange Truck Ride — Truck Driver gives the traveler a lift toward town for twenty dollars but behaves strangely. Characters: Truck Driver
Location: Remote road
A Vanished World
The traveler finds an empty town, an unresponsive secretary, and a deserted office. Regan says he was believed dead but offers no explanation for the business's shutdown.
Key Events
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Empty Main Street — The traveler reaches a town whose main street is completely devoid of people.
Location: Town main street
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Secretary Avoids Contact — The traveler meets his secretary, but she refuses to talk with him.
Location: Town
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Deserted Office — The office is deserted, and Regan says people believed the traveler was dead. Characters: Regan
Location: Office building
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Unexplained Business Closure — Regan refuses to explain why the business has stopped operating. Characters: Regan
Location: Office building
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Empty Family Home — The traveler returns home but cannot find his wife or children.
Location: Home
The State Takes Control
The traveler finds his home empty, is attacked, and wakes in jail. He learns that the Constitution has changed and is taken into an interrogation system that denies legal protection.
Key Events
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Abduction Attempt — Two men seize the traveler when he refuses to go with them.
Location: Outside the home
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Blow And Capture — The traveler is struck with a blunt weapon and loses consciousness.
Location: Outside the home
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Awakening In Jail — The traveler wakes in jail, where another prisoner gives him water.
Location: Jail cell
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Changed Constitution — Another prisoner says those in power have changed the American Constitution.
Location: Jail cell
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Interrogation Summons — The traveler is summoned to explain where he has been and whom he has met.
Location: Examiner's room
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Lawyer Denied — The authorities refuse the traveler access to a lawyer.
Location: Examiner's room
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Authoritarian Doctrine — The examiner describes a society without religion or free speech that punishes nonconformity.
Location: Examiner's room
Nightmare And Awakening
The examiner announces an authoritarian order and declares the traveler an enemy of the state. After a bleak dream of another family future, he wakes at the campsite and discovers the ordeal was only a bad dream.
Key Events
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Authoritarian Doctrine — The examiner describes a society without religion or free speech that punishes nonconformity.
Location: Examiner's room
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Enemy Of The State — The traveler is tied to a table, beaten, and declared an enemy of the state.
Location: Examiner's room
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Prison Cell Reflection — In his cell, the traveler considers the new world order and his desire to stop living.
Location: Jail cell
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Alternative Family Future — He dreams of a picnic with another family and sees his grown daughter being courted.
Location: Dream picnic
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Return To Camping — The scene fades to the traveler waking from a nap while still camping with his friend.
Location: Remote camping area
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Bad Dream Revealed — The entire authoritarian ordeal is revealed to have been a bad dream.
Location: Remote camping area