Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A City Sealed by Murder
A homicide report triggers a police search and the sealing of San Francisco's bridges and Highway 101. Bruno responds by constructing an alibi and warning Connie that escape routes are disappearing.
Key Events
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Homicide Reported — Police receive a report that a homicide has occurred.
Location: San Francisco
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City Exits Sealed — Police seal bridges and Highway 101 while searching for the killer.
Location: San Francisco approaches
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Suspect Search Begins — Police consider several possible suspects because the victim was widely disliked.
Location: San Francisco
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Bruno Builds an Alibi — Bruno relies on a telephone call and his arrival time to explain his whereabouts. Characters: Bruno Felkin
Location: San Francisco
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Warning at Connie's Home — Bruno warns Connie to leave before authorities close every escape route. Characters: Bruno Felkin, Connie Thatcher
Location: Connie Thatcher's home
Trouble on the Fishing Boat
Hamil and Carl Linder work together at sea, but Carl resents the labor and his father's values. Carl reveals the criminal choice that placed him on the boat and hears advice about more sophisticated schemes.
Key Events
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Boat Labor Introduced — Hamil and Carl work together on a fishing boat. Characters: Hamil Linder, Carl Linder
Location: Fishing boat
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Carl Resents the Work — Carl complains about hard labor and Hamil's old-fashioned values. Characters: Hamil Linder, Carl Linder
Location: Fishing boat
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Carl Reveals His Choice — Carl explains that he chose difficult sea work instead of prison after taking a car. Characters: Carl Linder
Location: Fishing boat
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Crime Advice at Sea — A fellow worker suggests that Carl pursue more sophisticated criminal schemes. Characters: Carl Linder
Location: Fishing boat
Loyalty Under Suspicion
Connie is confronted over Bruno's supposed romantic rival and refuses to abandon him. At the same time, Lt. Kelsey investigates Corky's disappearance and follows evidence involving a newly registered car.
Key Events
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Connie Is Confronted — A man confronts Connie while suspecting Bruno has a new romantic rival. Characters: Connie Thatcher
Location: San Francisco
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Connie Chooses Bruno — Connie refuses to abandon Bruno despite knowing he lies and endangers her. Characters: Connie Thatcher, Bruno Felkin
Location: San Francisco
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Kelsey Tracks Corky — Lt. Kelsey investigates Corky Mullins's disappearance. Characters: Lt. Kelsey, Corky Mullins
Location: San Francisco
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Car Registration Found — Kelsey learns that a new car was registered under Corky's name. Characters: Lt. Kelsey, Corky Mullins
Location: San Francisco
The Boat Connection
General Ball gives Kelsey an account of Corky's supposed fishing absence. Barney becomes connected to Hamil and the boat-related events, widening the unresolved mystery.
Key Events
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Ball Gives His Account — Ball claims that Corky is away fishing and may be gone indefinitely. Characters: 'General' Ball, Lt. Kelsey, Corky Mullins
Location: San Francisco
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Barney Joins the Boat Thread — Barney becomes connected to Hamil and the events surrounding the boat. Characters: Barney Schriona, Hamil Linder
Location: Fishing boat
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Bruno Reunites with Connie — Bruno reunites with Connie after the homicide disrupts his plans. Characters: Bruno Felkin, Connie Thatcher
Location: San Francisco
The Flight Toward Pier 43
Bruno reunites with Connie and reveals that the homicide has forced a desperate escape plan. He proposes South America and orders Connie to obtain letterheads for a meeting at Pier 43, where the available story ends.
Key Events
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Escape Plan Revealed — Bruno explains that the homicide has forced him into a desperate escape plan. Characters: Bruno Felkin, Connie Thatcher
Location: San Francisco
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South America Proposed — Bruno says that he and Connie could eventually travel to South America. Characters: Bruno Felkin, Connie Thatcher
Location: San Francisco
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Letterheads Requested — Bruno tells Connie to obtain letterheads from the victim's business. Characters: Bruno Felkin, Connie Thatcher
Location: Victim's business
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Pier 43 Meeting Set — Connie reluctantly agrees to deliver the letterheads at Pier 43 the next night. Characters: Bruno Felkin, Connie Thatcher
Location: North end of Pier 43