A teen romance exploring the awkwardness, expectations, and emotional growth surrounding first sexual intimacy.
Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Awkward Beginnings
Dave meets Aubrey at a party and they share an intimate conversation about virginity. Their initial connection is complicated by Dave's lingering crush on Jane and Aubrey's existing boyfriend.
Key Events
House Party Encounter — Dave meets Aubrey while rehearsing a love confession for Jane. Location: Outside house party
Police Raid Escape — A police raid forces Dave and Aubrey to flee together. Location: Party exterior
Wine and Virginity Talk — They share wine and discuss virginity before falling asleep. Location: Aubrey's room
Morning Window Escape — Dave sneaks out the window after Aubrey's mother knocks. Location: Aubrey's room
Breakfast Strategy Session — Dave consults his friends about inviting Aubrey to the movies. Location: Diner
Jealousy and Confrontation
Romantic tension escalates during a movie outing and pool conversation. Dave intervenes physically when Aubrey's boyfriend brags about losing her virginity, marking a major shift in their dynamic.
Key Events
Breakfast Strategy Session — Dave consults his friends about inviting Aubrey to the movies. Location: Diner
Theater Flirtation — Jane flirts with Dave in the theater, confusing him and upsetting Aubrey. Location: Movie theater
Lobby Apology — Aubrey apologizes for her strange behavior and Dave gets her number. Location: Cinema lobby
Pool Conversation — Jane and Aubrey discuss Dave, revealing Aubrey's growing jealousy. Location: Pool
Van Brag and Jealousy — Ronny brags about planning to have sex with Aubrey that night. Location: Street
The First Time
After dumping her boyfriend, Aubrey and Dave realize their mutual feelings. They meet at her house and decide to lose their virginity together, navigating awkward preparation and execution.
Key Events
Van Brag and Jealousy — Ronny brags about planning to have sex with Aubrey that night. Location: Street
Street Intervention — Dave nearly fights Ronny to stop him from taking Aubrey's virginity. Location: Street
Jane's Bedroom Complaint — Jane complains about her sexual misadventures, prompting Dave to leave. Location: Bedroom
Text and Pickup — Dave receives a text from Aubrey and picks her up. Location: Street
Accident Aftermath — They pass the wrecked van, triggering Aubrey's realization of mutual feelings. Location: Roadside
First Kiss — Dave and Aubrey acknowledge their feelings and share a kiss. Location: Car
Awkward Aftermath and Reconciliation
The unsatisfying experience leads to a breakup and regret. With friends' advice, Dave confesses his feelings again, leading to a mutual agreement to try again and a final passionate kiss.
Key Events
First Kiss — Dave and Aubrey acknowledge their feelings and share a kiss. Location: Car
Park Meeting — Dave meets Aubrey with his sister Stella before heading to her house. Location: Park
First Sex Attempt — They decide to have sex together, navigating awkward preparation. Location: Aubrey's room
Awkward Aftermath — Both feel unsatisfied and awkward, agreeing to end the relationship. Location: Aubrey's room
Friends Intervention — Simon and Big Corporation advise Dave that they should try again. Location: Street
Driveway Declaration — Dave declares his feelings and asks to try again. Location: Driveway
Car Agreement — Aubrey agrees to work on their relationship and intimacy. Location: Car
Final Passionate Kiss — Aubrey breaks her no PDA rule and runs back for a warm kiss. Location: School
Story Breakdown
Initial Encounters — Dave and Aubrey meet at a party and share personal conversations, establishing a tentative connection.
Party Meeting — Dave practices a confession for Jane while meeting Aubrey.
Wine Conversation — They discuss virginity and past experiences over wine.
Romantic Confusion — Dave's lingering feelings for Jane and Aubrey's boyfriend create misunderstandings and jealousy.
Theater Flirt — Jane flirts with Dave, confusing him and upsetting Aubrey.
Pool Jealousy — Aubrey and Jane discuss Dave, revealing hidden romantic tension.
Rivalry and Confrontation — Dave directly challenges Aubrey's boyfriend to protect her from a rushed intimate encounter.
Van Brag — Ronny brags about planning to have sex with Aubrey.
Street Intervention — Dave nearly fights Ronny, asserting his genuine care for Aubrey.
First Intimacy — Aubrey dumps Ronny, and Dave and Aubrey decide to lose their virginity together.
Park Meeting — Dave meets Aubrey with his sister before heading to her house.
Bedroom Decision — They navigate awkward preparation and agree to proceed together.
Awkward Aftermath — The unsatisfying experience leads to regret, a breakup, and emotional distance.
Unsatisfied Experience — Both feel awkward and agree to stop seeing each other.
Friends Advice — Simon and Big Corporation encourage Dave to try again.
Reconciliation — Dave declares his feelings again, leading to mutual agreement and a passionate resolution.
Driveway Declaration — Dave confesses his true feelings and asks for a second chance.
Final Kiss — Aubrey breaks her rule and returns for a warm, passionate kiss.
Zachary is 20 years old. Dark and independent, he collects amorous conquests and school failure. Sarah is 18 years old. First class, fragile, she fills her emotional gaps with perfect control of his life. Nothing should close and yet, the year of the tank, for six months, they will live a love against which nothing can be, the true, the big one that marks a life forever.
