Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Place in the Choir
The story introduces the difficulty of being accepted for one's voice, then follows Mácha's demanding rehearsals. Simona is reprimanded while the girls share stories and gossip.
Key Events
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A Singer Is Turned Away — A young girl sings beside her mother, but the evaluator says her voice cannot produce the required sound.
Location: Audition room
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Strict Choir Rehearsals — Mácha pushes the choir through demanding rehearsals. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir rehearsal room
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Simona Is Reprimanded — Mácha scolds Simona for not learning her part and threatens her place in the group. Characters: Vít Mácha, Simona
Location: Choir rehearsal room
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Gossip Among Singers — The girls trade stories and gossip about one another. Characters: Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir gathering place
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Curfew Is Announced — A chaperone sets a strict curfew for the girls. Characters: Lucie (15)
Location: Gathering
The Cost of Selection
Lucie's late return brings an angry confrontation at home. Mácha announces that only twenty singers can tour, and the selection process raises anxiety among the choir.
Key Events
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Curfew Is Announced — A chaperone sets a strict curfew for the girls. Characters: Lucie (15)
Location: Gathering
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Lucie Returns Late — Lucie breaks curfew by returning late and faces an angry confrontation at home. Characters: Lucie (15)
Location: Home
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Tour Selection Begins — Mácha explains that only twenty of thirty singers can join the American tour. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir rehearsal room
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Positions Are Assigned — Mácha assigns folders and positions as preparation for the tour selection. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir rehearsal room
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Voices Are Tested — Mácha tests the girls' voices during the selection process. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir rehearsal room
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Anxious Preparations — The limited tour places create anxiety as exacting rehearsals continue. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir rehearsal room
A Test at Camp
At camp, the girls balance shared singing and joking with demanding preparations. Mácha asks Lucie to take the opening part in place of Andula.
Key Events
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Camp Rehearsals — The girls rehearse, sing, and joke together during camp. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir camp
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Lucie Takes the Opening — Mácha asks Lucie to take the opening part in place of Andula. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Andula (15)
Location: Choir camp
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Preparations Take Their Toll — The demanding tour preparations wear on the girls despite their moments of joking together. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Choir camp
The Tour Opens
After the choir returns early, Mácha visits Lucie and the sick girl and explains the demands of touring. He reveals that both have been chosen, and the story ends with the girls settling into their hotel on the United States trip.
Key Events
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The Choir Returns Early — After camp, the choir returns early and the adults learn that one girl is ill. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15)
Location: Choir camp
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Mácha Visits the Sick Girl — Mácha visits and speaks with Lucie and the sick girl; the girl's name is not given in the plot. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15)
Location: Sick girl's location
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Touring Demands Reliability — Mácha stresses that touring is exhausting and that he needs singers he can rely on. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15)
Location: Sick girl's location
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Two Girls Are Selected — Mácha reveals that he has chosen Lucie and the sick girl for the trip to the United States. Characters: Vít Mácha, Lucie (15)
Location: Sick girl's location
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Lucie Celebrates Her Chance — The girls react with delight to the tour selection; Lucie now has a chance after narrowly missing an earlier overseas tour. Characters: Lucie (15)
Location: Sick girl's location
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Arrival in the United States — The girls arrive at their hotel during the choir's tour. Characters: Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Tour hotel
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Rooms on the Eleventh Floor — The girls discover their rooms and settle in amid the excitement and disorder of the tour. Characters: Lucie (15), Judita (15), Simona, Andula (15)
Location: Eleventh floor of the tour hotel