Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Burial Across Borders
News of a father's death sends Michael and Luis to Norway for the burial. At the old house, they find the manuscript and confront the traces of a solitary life.
Key Events
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Death Announcement — News arrives that a father has died of a heart attack. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Family home
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Norwegian Burial Request — The deceased left instructions to be buried in Norway. Characters: Michael
Location: Family home
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Journey to Norway — Michael travels to Norway with Luis to handle the burial arrangements. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Road to Norway
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Arrival at the House — They arrive at the house where the old man had lived alone. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: House in Norway
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Tunnel Manuscript Found — They discover a nearly two-hundred-page manuscript about tunnel building. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: House in Norway
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Luis Claims the Manuscript — Luis asks to keep the manuscript, while Michael considers their next steps. Characters: Luis, Michael
Location: House in Norway
The Unwanted Detour
Michael proposes staying in Norway, but the journey quickly becomes strained. Arguments about Luis's life and the unannounced hike reveal their distance.
Key Events
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Extended Stay Proposed — Michael suggests remaining in Norway after dealing with the formalities. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: House in Norway
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Arguments Begin — They argue about Luis's countryside life, friends, and abandoned football career. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian road
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Failed Conversation — Michael tries to make conversation and encourage Luis to enjoy the landscape. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian road
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Unannounced Hike — Luis resents being taken on an unannounced three-day hike. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian countryside
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Car Runs Out of Fuel — The car runs out of fuel, forcing them to continue on foot. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Remote Norwegian road
Walking Through Resentment
After the car runs out of fuel, father and son walk toward town and into the hills. Practical choices about the hike repeatedly intensify their irritation.
Key Events
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Walk Toward Town — They walk toward the next town and argue over the route. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Road toward the next town
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Route Decisions Escalate — Arguments continue over maps, food, clothing, and the route through the hills. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian hills
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Luis Becomes Dizzy — Luis becomes dizzy during the hike and needs to rest. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian hills
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Michael Thanks Luis — During the pause, Michael thanks Luis for coming with him. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian hills
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Michael Confesses His Failures — Michael admits that he continued seeing other women while Luis's mother was pregnant. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian hills
The Confession Rejected
Luis's dizziness creates a pause in which Michael admits his past failures and lost opportunities as a father. Luis refuses the confession and demands distance.
Key Events
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Lost Fatherhood Explained — Michael says he loved Luis's mother but failed to care for Luis as he had wanted. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Norwegian hills
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Luis Rejects the Confession — Luis calls Michael's confession nonsense and refuses to hear more. Characters: Luis, Michael
Location: Norwegian hills
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Luis Shouts His Hatred — Luis orders Michael to stay back, leave him alone, and finally shouts that he hates him. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Remote Norwegian landscape
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Conflict Remains Unresolved — The story ends with their conflict unresolved in the Norwegian landscape. Characters: Michael, Luis
Location: Remote Norwegian landscape