Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Hair Loss and Financial Strain
Andrew struggles with rapidly thinning hair and tries remedies without success. Max reassures him as financial problems begin to loom.
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Andrew Worries About Hair Loss — Andrew is distressed by his rapidly thinning hair. Characters: Andrew Wood
Location: Unspecified
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Remedies Fail — Andrew tries products and remedies, but none stop his hair loss. Characters: Andrew Wood
Location: Unspecified
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Max Offers Reassurance — Max reassures Andrew and helps him navigate campus life. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Campus
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Money Troubles Loom — Financial trouble prompts Max to pursue a new business. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified
A Risky New Enterprise
Max brings Andrew into an online adult-entertainment business, where Andrew becomes CEO in name. The operation recruits performers and grows profitable.
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Max Recruits Andrew — Max brings Andrew into an online adult-entertainment business. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified
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Andrew Becomes CEO — Andrew becomes CEO in name as the operation takes shape. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified
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Heather Joins the Venture — Heather is among the women recruited to perform for paying viewers. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop, Heather
Location: Unspecified
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Cynthia Joins the Venture — Shirtless Cynthia is recruited for the online entertainment business. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop, Shirtless Cynthia
Location: Unspecified
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The Business Turns Profitable — The venture becomes highly profitable through paid online performances. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop, Heather, Shirtless Cynthia
Location: Online business
Money and Intimacy
The business gives Andrew hope of paying for a hair transplant and returning to school. His relationship with Caroline is tested when she learns he hid the source of his income, then steadied by his apology.
Key Events
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Andrew Sees a Way Forward — Andrew hopes to fund a hair transplant and return to school by settling his financial problems. Characters: Andrew Wood
Location: Unspecified
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Andrew Starts Seeing Caroline — Andrew begins a romantic relationship with Caroline. Characters: Andrew Wood, Caroline Goldman
Location: Unspecified
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Caroline Learns the Truth — Caroline is hurt when she learns Andrew concealed how he earned his money. Characters: Andrew Wood, Caroline Goldman
Location: Unspecified
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Andrew Apologizes — Andrew apologizes and promises not to lie again; Caroline says she loves him and stays. Characters: Andrew Wood, Caroline Goldman
Location: Unspecified
Exposure and Anger
A commercial exposes campus women who appeared online, and angry fathers discover their daughters' involvement. One father vows to find and kill the person responsible, while the men gather to confront Andrew and his associates.
Key Events
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Campus Commercial Exposes Performers — A commercial exposes women from the campus as participants in the business. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop, Heather, Shirtless Cynthia
Location: Campus
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Fathers Seek Accountability — Angry fathers discover their daughters appeared online; one vows to find and kill the person responsible. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified
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The Men Confront Andrew — The fathers gather to confront Andrew and his associates over the business. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified
A Defense Before the Fathers
Andrew refuses to deny the business and argues that the women chose to participate and can support themselves. He challenges the fathers to consider whether they want financial need to dictate their daughters' futures, then offers tea containing herbs and placebos.
Key Events
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Andrew Defends the Performers — Andrew argues that the women chose to participate and earned enough to support themselves. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified
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Andrew Challenges the Fathers — Andrew asks whether the fathers want their daughters' futures dictated by financial need. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified
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Tea and Placebos — Andrew offers the men tea containing herbs and placebos as they reckon with his argument. Characters: Andrew Wood, Max Bishop
Location: Unspecified