Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Kits Become Obsession
Pinewood derby kits are distributed for the boys to build with adult supervision. The fathers instead take control, and their obsession drives the families away.
Key Events
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Derby Kits Distributed — Each Cub Scout receives a pinewood derby kit under the expectation of adult supervision.
Location: Cub Scout meeting
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Adults Take Control — Four fathers obsessively take over the car-building project and exclude the boys.
Location: Family homes
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Obsession Escalates — The fathers become increasingly focused on building the fastest possible cars.
Location: Family homes
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Families Walk Out — The wives leave the houses with their sons because of the fathers' obsessive behavior.
Location: Family homes
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Jimmy Breaks Secrecy — Big Jimmy becomes the first adult to reveal the secret behind the record-winning car. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Family home
Chasing The Record
Big Jimmy reveals the secret behind the famous record car. The adults study Ace Montana's design and risk being caught while returning it.
Key Events
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The Derby Bible — The title page identifies Ace Montana as the author of the Pinewood Derby Bible. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Family home
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Record Car Discovered — The adults learn that Ace Montana's childhood car still holds the pinewood derby speed record. Characters: Big Jimmy, Ace Montana
Location: Family home
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A Shared Challenge — Three adults decide to collaborate on one car capable of defeating the standing record. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Workshop
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Record Car Stolen — The collaborators steal Ace Montana's record-holding car so they can study its construction. Characters: Big Jimmy, Ace Montana
Location: Record car location
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Car Reverse-Engineered — The adults examine the record car and uncover information about Ace Montana's identity. Characters: Big Jimmy, Ace Montana
Location: Workshop
Building A Challenger
The collaborators complete a car designed to beat the record. At the derby, competing ideas about ownership and fairness divide the adults.
Key Events
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Near Discovery — The collaborators are nearly caught while returning the stolen record-holding car. Characters: Big Jimmy, Ace Montana
Location: Record car location
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New Car Completed — The three adults successfully build a fast car designed to break the standing record. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Workshop
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Honor Is Offered — Big Jimmy and the other collaborator decide that another boy should enter the jointly built car. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Workshop
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Families Reunite — The families reunite at the pinewood derby competition.
Location: Derby venue
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A Handmade Alternative — A boy's independently built car is presented after he receives advice while staying with his grandfather.
Location: Derby venue
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Jimmy Takes The Car — After another adult chooses the handmade car, Big Jimmy takes the collaborative car for his son to enter. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Derby venue
The Final Run
The field narrows to six finalists, including Ace Montana's car and two challengers. Mechanical failure changes the race before the independent car wins.
Key Events
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Jimmy Takes The Car — After another adult chooses the handmade car, Big Jimmy takes the collaborative car for his son to enter. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Derby venue
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Six Finalists Remain — Several races reduce the field to six finalists, including Ace Montana's car and the two major challengers. Characters: Big Jimmy, Ace Montana
Location: Derby track
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Wheel Failure — The collaborative car leads the final race but loses a wheel on the track. Characters: Big Jimmy
Location: Final derby track
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Ace Takes The Lead — Ace Montana's car moves into first place after the leading car breaks down. Characters: Ace Montana
Location: Final derby track
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New Record Set — The independently built car takes the lead on the flat section, wins, and sets a new pinewood derby record. Characters: Big Jimmy, Ace Montana
Location: Final derby track
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Ace Congratulates Winners — Ace Montana makes a gesture of congratulation toward the winning family after losing the record. Characters: Ace Montana
Location: Derby venue
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Temper Tantrum Revealed — Immediately after leaving the room, Ace Montana throws a temper tantrum over the result. Characters: Ace Montana
Location: Derby venue
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Video Adviser Identified — The boy identifies the neighbor who offered advice as the person shown in the instructional video.
Location: Derby audience area