Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Body in the Backyard
Diane's body is found in Steve's backyard, and police question him about the night she died. His account and the attention drawn to his gun and work gloves leave suspicion unresolved.
Key Events
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Opening Song About Identity — A song introduces a woman longing to be seen beyond her family roles.
Location: Unspecified
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Diane Found Dead — Diane, a 27-year-old singer, is found dead in Steve's backyard. Characters: Diane, Steve
Location: Steve's backyard
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Police Question Steve — Police question Steve about the night Diane's body was found. Characters: Steve, Sgt. Winslow
Location: Unspecified
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Steve Gives His Account — Steve says he slept in his garage and saw nothing; his gun and work-glove habit draw attention. Characters: Steve, Sgt. Winslow
Location: Unspecified
Under Neighborhood Suspicion
News coverage identifies Steve as the homeowner who called 911, while neighbors taunt him as a killer. Alone at home, he grows uneasy about noises and installs an old security-camera system.
Key Events
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News Names Steve — News coverage identifies Steve as the homeowner who called 911. Characters: Steve
Location: Steve's home
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Neighbors Taunt Steve — Neighbors call Steve a killer and treat him as a suspect. Characters: Steve
Location: Steve's neighborhood
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Noises Disturb Steve — Living alone and walking with a cane, Steve becomes unsettled by noises around his house. Characters: Steve
Location: Steve's home
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Security Cameras Installed — Steve buys an old camera system to watch for someone returning to the yard. Characters: Steve
Location: Steve's home
Diane's Unsettling Presence
Steve experiences what seem to be Diane's voice and presence and searches for explanations of ghosts. Their exchanges become intimate as she asks him to say he loves her and recalls promises.
Key Events
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Diane's Voice Appears — Steve experiences what seem to be Diane's voice and presence. Characters: Steve, Diane
Location: Steve's home
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Steve Searches for Ghosts — Steve searches for explanations of ghosts and tries to make sense of the encounters. Characters: Steve
Location: Unspecified
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Diane Demands Love — Diane asks Steve to say he loves her and reminds him of promises. Characters: Steve, Diane
Location: Unspecified
Grief and Unfinished Confessions
A man identifying himself as Diane's husband speaks with Steve about her death, her singing, and his own sense of failure. Steve and Diane also discuss his isolation and her disappointments as a performer; the supplied scenes leave the murder and her appearances unresolved.
Key Events
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Husband Seeks Conversation — A man identifying himself as Diane's husband comes to speak with Steve about her death. Characters: Steve
Location: Steve's home
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Husband Remembers Diane — The husband praises Diane's singing and says he feels he failed her despite being her greatest fan. Characters: Steve
Location: Steve's home
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Steve Discusses His Isolation — Steve discusses his military service, injured leg, and lack of friends or family with Diane. Characters: Steve, Diane
Location: Unspecified
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Diane Recalls Disappointment — Diane describes career disappointments and financial pressures; Steve encourages her and says he is her fan. Characters: Steve, Diane
Location: Unspecified