Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Warnings Become Reality
Professor Loss dismisses fears of dictatorship, while a news report presents dissenters as enemies. A family's discussion of news and a proposed book ban shows that political repression is becoming harder to ignore.
Key Events
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Loss Rejects Dictatorship Fears — Professor Loss argues that American institutions are resilient and civil-war fears are exaggerated. Characters: Professor Gerald Loss
Location: Unspecified setting
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News Frames Dissent — A report depicts protests and portrays dissenters as enemies of the country. Characters: News Anchor
Location: News report
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Family Limits News — A parent tries to inform a child while limiting exposure to frightening news.
Location: Home
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Book Ban Debate — The family discusses a school board effort to ban the book and whether a civil-rights firm should challenge it.
Location: Home
Emergency Rule and Flight
After the Capitol bombing, the president declares martial law and arrests people for political activity. Free America helps a family and other fugitives reach a remote lodge.
Key Events
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Capitol Bombing — A bombing at the Capitol precedes the president's emergency measures.
Location: Capitol
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Martial Law Declared — The president invokes emergency powers, declares martial law, and arrests people for political activity or affiliation.
Location: Unspecified setting
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Escape to Lodge — Free America helps a family and other fugitives escape roundups and hide at a remote lodge.
Location: Remote lodge
Suspicion at the Lodge
The fugitives learn that armed conflict is spreading and debate whom they can trust. The discovery of caretaker Jeff sparks a dispute over whether to confine him, raising concerns that the resistance may imitate the control it opposes.
Key Events
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War Spreads — The fugitives learn that armed conflict is spreading across the country.
Location: Remote lodge
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Trust Divides Resistance — Resistance members argue about trust and survival.
Location: Remote lodge
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Caretaker Discovered — The group discovers lodge caretaker Jeff and debates whether he is dangerous or an innocent man caught there. Characters: Jeff Mills (as Jedidia), Mark Goodman
Location: Remote lodge
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Confinement Dispute — Mark favors locking Jeff up, while others object that his presence is not a crime. Characters: Mark Goodman, Jeff Mills (as Jedidia)
Location: Remote lodge
Scarcity and an Unsettled Choice
Looters take most of the group's food and fuel, and reports of possible outside support do not ease its immediate needs. As cold, hunger, and illness worsen, the group debates a risky medicine run without reaching a decision in the provided dialogue.
Key Events
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Looters Take Supplies — Looters break in and take most of the group's food and fuel.
Location: Remote lodge
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Outside Help Reported — News reports say U.N. troops may support resistance forces, but the group's immediate hardship remains.
Location: Remote lodge
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Illness Deepens — Cold and hunger wear down the group as an older member's health worsens and his medication runs out.
Location: Remote lodge
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Medicine Run Unresolved — The group debates risking a supply run for medicine, and the provided dialogue ends before a decision.
Location: Remote lodge