Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Wish Beneath The Eclipse
Milly struggles against expectations about how a girl should behave. Malcolm offers her a spell, which she performs during the eclipse despite believing it initially failed.
Key Events
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Tomboyish Frustration — Milly grows frustrated with restrictions placed on her tomboyish behavior. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Family home
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Pressure To Conform — Milly faces expectations to prefer dances and dresses. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Family home
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Malcolm Sells The Spell — Malcolm sells Milly a spell promising to grant her deepest wish. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman, Malcolm
Location: Unspecified setting
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The Eclipse Approaches — The spell is tied to the upcoming eclipse. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman, Malcolm
Location: Unspecified setting
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Spell Performance — Milly performs the spell during the eclipse. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Unspecified setting
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Apparent Failure — Milly believes that the spell has failed. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Unspecified setting
The Boy In The Mirror
Milly discovers that the spell transformed her into a boy. After telling her family and receiving encouragement, she adopts the name Willy.
Key Events
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Apparent Failure — Milly believes that the spell has failed. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Unspecified setting
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Transformation Revealed — The next morning, Milly discovers that she has become a boy. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Family home
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Family Disclosure — Milly tells her family what happened to her. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Family home
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Encouragement To Explore — Her father encourages her to explore her new masculinity. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Family home
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Milly Becomes Willy — Milly changes her name to Willy after the transformation. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Family home
A Complicated New Life
Willy enters a new school and initially accepts the new persona. The experience becomes more difficult when Willy realizes that life as a boy is not necessarily easier.
Key Events
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Transfer To New School — Willy begins attending a new school as a transfer student. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: New school
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New Persona Accepted — Willy initially takes well to the new persona and gender. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: New school
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Life Is Not Easier — Willy realizes that life is not necessarily easier as a boy. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: New school
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Feelings For Alfie — Milly begins to recognize her feelings for her friend Alfie. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman, Alfie
Location: New school
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Alfie's Confusion — Alfie is confused about his feelings for Willy. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman, Alfie
Location: New school
The Star Shower Return
Milly's feelings for Alfie and Alfie's confusion deepen her identity conflict. She decides to become female again, obtains a wishing stone from Malcolm, and successfully reverses the spell.
Key Events
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Identity Conflict — Milly's gender experience and feelings for Alfie become increasingly conflicted. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman, Alfie
Location: New school
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Decision To Return — Milly decides that she wants to become female again. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Unspecified setting
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The Wishing Stone — Malcolm sells Milly a wishing stone for reversing the transformation. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman, Malcolm
Location: Unspecified setting
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Star Shower Ritual — Milly prepares to throw the stone at her favorite star at 12:03. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Night sky
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Milly Returns — The wishing stone works, and Milly turns back into a girl. Characters: Willy/Milly Niceman
Location: Night sky