Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Life Frozen in Place
Jane lives with the consequences of the injury that ended her Olympic gymnastics career. Her marriage is loveless and childless, while disciplined exercise preserves her physical identity.
Key Events
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Olympic Career Ends — A devastating injury ends Jane's Olympic gymnastics career. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Olympic gymnastics world
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Life After Gymnastics — Jane is now in her forties and works as a massage therapist. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Jane's adult life
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Marriage Without Fulfillment — Jane is described as being in a loveless and childless marriage. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Jane's marriage
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Relentless Exercise — Jane exercises religiously to maintain peak physical condition. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Exercise setting
A Door Opens Through Dance
A chance meeting with Denise reconnects Jane with her former gymnastics world. Jane responds by beginning aerial dance lessons and meeting Serena.
Key Events
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Chance Reunion — Jane unexpectedly meets Denise, a former friend from gymnastics. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Denise
Location: Gymnastics-related setting
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Aerial Dance Interest — The reunion leads Jane to take an interest in aerial dance. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Denise
Location: Aerial dance setting
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Lessons Begin — Jane begins aerial dance lessons with gymnastics trainer Nicole. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Aerial dance lessons
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Meeting Serena — Jane meets Serena, a Korean-American dancer, during the lessons. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Aerial dance lessons
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Serena's Hidden Identity — Serena is described as a closeted lesbian with respect to her parents. Characters: Serena
Location: Serena's family background
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Aerial Team Forms — Jane and Serena begin developing an aerial performance together. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Aerial dance training space
The Partnership Takes Flight
Jane, Serena, and Nicole develop a Cirque du Soleil-style aerial act aimed at Las Vegas. Nicole's forced departure leaves Jane and Serena to continue the project together.
Key Events
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Las Vegas Ambition — The group plans a Cirque du Soleil-style act for possible presentation in Las Vegas. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Aerial performance project
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Nicole Drops Out — Nicole is forced to leave the project for family reasons. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Aerial dance project
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Partnership Continues — Jane and Serena continue preparing the act after Nicole's departure. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Aerial dance training space
Love Against Obligation
Jane and Serena's artistic partnership becomes increasingly romantic. Jane is torn between this love and her husband's renewed wish to have a child.
Key Events
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Feelings Deepen — Their continued work develops into an increasingly romantic relationship. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Aerial dance project
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Marriage Reconsidered — Jane becomes torn between Serena and the possibility of renewing her marriage. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Jane's marriage
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A Child Is Proposed — Jane's husband expresses a renewed desire to have a child. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Jane's marriage
Leaving for Las Vegas
Jane's husband discovers the attraction between the two women, and Jane packs her bags and leaves. She drives toward Las Vegas, where Serena is.
Key Events
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Attraction Discovered — Jane's husband finds out about the attraction between Jane and Serena. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Jane's marriage
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Jane Packs Her Bags — After the discovery, Jane packs her bags and leaves. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Jane's home
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Drive Toward Las Vegas — Jane drives toward Las Vegas, where Serena is located. Characters: Jane Hawkins
Location: Road to Las Vegas
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Las Vegas Destination — The movie ends with Jane driving to Las Vegas, where Serena is. Characters: Jane Hawkins, Serena
Location: Las Vegas