Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Crooks at the Edge
Wes and Nick are introduced as small-time crooks facing the end of their lives. Their shared predicament establishes the story's initial crisis.
Key Events
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Wes and Nick's Criminal Life — Wes and Nick are introduced as small-time crooks. Characters: Wes, Nick
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A Shared Dead End — The two crooks face the apparent end of their lives. Characters: Wes, Nick
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Their Lives Converge — Wes and Nick confront the same desperate life situation. Characters: Wes, Nick
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The Criminal Past — Their identity as small-time crooks defines their starting point. Characters: Wes, Nick
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Mr. Bix Appears — The mysterious Mr. Bix enters their predicament. Characters: Mr. Bix, Wes, Nick
The Mysterious Intervention
Mr. Bix enters the story and gives Wes and Nick a second chance. His intervention changes the direction of their lives.
Key Events
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A Mysterious Offer — Mr. Bix becomes connected to a second chance for both men. Characters: Mr. Bix, Wes, Nick
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The Second Chance — Wes and Nick receive the opportunity to begin again. Characters: Wes, Nick, Mr. Bix
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Wes Faces Renewal — Wes becomes subject to the second-chance intervention. Characters: Wes, Mr. Bix
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Nick Faces Renewal — Nick becomes subject to the second-chance intervention. Characters: Nick, Mr. Bix
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Time Starts Shifting — The second chance causes time to shift around Wes and Nick. Characters: Wes, Nick
Reality Unbound
Time, space, and reality begin to shift around the two men. The altered circumstances force them to reconsider their former lives.
Key Events
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Space Starts Shifting — The altered situation extends from time into space. Characters: Wes, Nick
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Reality Starts Shifting — Time, space, and reality shift after Mr. Bix's intervention. Characters: Wes, Nick, Mr. Bix
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Old Lives Reconsidered — The changed reality forces them beyond their former lives. Characters: Wes, Nick
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A Chance To Change — Wes and Nick confront the possibility of changing themselves. Characters: Wes, Nick
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Amends Become Their Goal — Their second chance is tied to trying to make amends. Characters: Wes, Nick
The Work of Amends
Wes and Nick try to use their second chance to make amends. Their efforts become the central test of the opportunity they received.
Key Events
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Amends Become Their Goal — Their second chance is tied to trying to make amends. Characters: Wes, Nick
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Wes Attempts Amends — Wes tries to use his second chance to make amends. Characters: Wes
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Nick Attempts Amends — Nick tries to use his second chance to make amends. Characters: Nick
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Partners Face Altered Reality — Both men continue their efforts while reality remains unstable. Characters: Wes, Nick
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The Second Chance Tested — The altered circumstances test what Wes and Nick will do with renewal. Characters: Wes, Nick, Mr. Bix
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Amends Remain Central — The story resolves around their attempt to make amends. Characters: Wes, Nick
Wes and Nick are two small time crooks facing the end of their lives. When they get a second chance from the mysterious Mr. Bix, time, space and reality seem to shift as they try and make amends.