Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Old Contest
Young Suzanne struggles under pressure at a talent show, freezes during her performance, and asks to begin again. Heather's confident performance sharpens the contrast between the two girls.
Key Events
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Suzanne Faces the Talent Show — Young Suzanne faces pressure before performing in a talent show. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Mrs. Boxer
Location: Talent show
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Suzanne Freezes onstage — Suzanne freezes during her performance and insists on starting again. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer
Location: Talent show stage
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Heather Performs Confidently — Heather takes the stage after Suzanne and performs with confidence. Characters: Heather Romley
Location: Talent show stage
A Place in the Band
The band prepares songs and performances, and Zanne impresses its members with her singing. Heather feels pushed aside, while Nick rejects Zanne's request for lyric feedback and cautions her against replacing Heather.
Key Events
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The Band Prepares Its Songs — The band prepares songs and performances as its internal relationships shift. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Heather Romley, Simon, Nick, Musician
Location: Band rehearsal setting
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Zanne Impresses the Band — Zanne impresses the musicians with her singing and becomes more involved with them. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Simon, Musician
Location: Band rehearsal setting
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Heather Feels Pushed Aside — Heather, who helped promote the band, clashes with others when she feels excluded. Characters: Heather Romley, Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Simon, Musician
Location: Band setting
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Nick Rejects Zanne's Lyrics — Nick rejects Zanne's request for lyric feedback and warns her not to replace Heather. Characters: Nick, Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer
Location: Band setting
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Simon Celebrates His Birthday — Tensions around Simon's birthday accompany shifting loyalties within the group. Characters: Simon, Heather Romley, Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer
Location: Unspecified gathering
The Night at the Club
The group performs at the club, but Heather says she is too unwell to join the others afterward. The next day, they learn that a body has been found in an alley nearby, prompting fear and talk of precautions.
Key Events
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The Band Plays at the Club — The band performs at a club before the group goes out afterward. Characters: Heather Romley, Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Simon, Nick, Musician
Location: Club
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Heather Stays Behind — Heather says she feels too unwell to join the others; Zanne and the band go out. Characters: Heather Romley, Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Simon, Nick, Musician
Location: Near the club
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A Body Is Found Nearby — The group learns that a body has been found in an alley near the club. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Heather Romley, Simon, Nick, Musician
Location: Alley near the club
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The Group Discusses Precautions — The discovery makes the city feel dangerous and prompts discussion of precautions. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Heather Romley, Simon, Nick, Musician
Location: Band setting
Questions and Recollections
Questions about the night at the club lead to Zanne being questioned, while rivalries within the band continue. Zanne seeks support and later visits Mrs. Romley, whose recollections return the story to childhood ambitions and painful relationships; the available account ends before the conflicts are resolved.
Key Events
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Zanne Is Questioned — Questions arise about who was at the club and what happened that night, and Zanne is questioned. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer
Location: Unspecified questioning location
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Zanne Asks for Support — Zanne asks the others not to abandon her; they urge her to cooperate and focus on the group's work. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Heather Romley, Simon, Nick, Musician
Location: Band setting
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Zanne Visits Mrs. Romley — Zanne visits a girl's mother to discuss her worries about the girl's stress and isolation. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Mrs. Romley
Location: Mrs. Romley's home
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Mrs. Romley Recalls Her Daughter — Mrs. Romley recalls her daughter's love of talent shows and their close bond; the account ends unresolved. Characters: Zanne Armstrong / Suzanne Boxer, Mrs. Romley
Location: Mrs. Romley's home