Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Vanishing Submarine
A submarine disappears inside a Bermuda Triangle portal, and Alan / John Deakins later returns claiming to have seen the future. His story is rejected, but a new expedition is organized to test it.
Key Events
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Submarine Enters Portal — A naval submarine accidentally enters a portal and disappears. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Bermuda Triangle
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Deakins Returns — Deakins resurfaces years later and claims to have traveled into the future. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Naval facility
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Institutional Confinement — The navy rejects Deakins' account and confines him to a mental institution. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Mental institution
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Expedition Organized — A paranormal research organization finances an expedition to recreate the portal accident. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Cole, Schmidt
Location: Military research facility
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Deakins Released — A government authorization enables Deakins to leave the institution for the expedition. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Mental institution
Crossing Into 2077
The expedition recreates the accident and crosses the portal. A military force captures the crew, while Spitz reveals that they have entered a post-apocalyptic future.
Key Events
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Deakins Released — A government authorization enables Deakins to leave the institution for the expedition. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Mental institution
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Farewell Before Departure — Deakins visits home before leaving, creating an emotionally difficult farewell. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Deakins residence
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Second Portal Crossing — The expedition submarine successfully enters the portal. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Cole, Schmidt
Location: Bermuda Triangle
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Submarine Boarded — A military vessel attacks and boards the submarine after the portal crossing. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Cole, Schmidt, Koda
Location: Future ocean
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The Year 2077 — Spitz reveals that the crew has arrived in a post-apocalyptic year 2077. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Spitz
Location: Prison lockup
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Schmidt Is Killed — A guard kills Schmidt after he talks back to the authorities. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Schmidt
Location: Prison lockup
Escape And Resistance
After violence in prison, Spitz helps the survivors escape to a rebel base. They learn about the cyborg army and join an assault to recover its essential computer chip.
Key Events
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Prison Violence — Marjorie is assaulted by a guard, and Deakins kills the guard after discovering what happened. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie
Location: Prison facility
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Spitz Breaks Prisoners Out — Spitz frees Deakins, Marjorie, and another prisoner from confinement. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Spitz
Location: Prison complex
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Rebel Base Reached — The escapees travel to the rebels' base and meet the future rebellion's leader. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Spitz
Location: Rebel base
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Cyborg Army Revealed — The rebels explain that an army of human-looking cyborgs is being created. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Spitz
Location: Rebel base
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Base Assault Begins — The group assaults the base to recover the chip essential to cyborg creation. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Cole, Spitz
Location: Hostile military base
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Chip Recovered — The team recovers the chip and rescues the research leader during the escape. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Marjorie, Cole
Location: Hostile military base
Clones Across Time
The survivors flee through the portal while Koda pursues them, then discover that the returning future leader is a cyborg clone. The threat continues into the present through the stolen chip and hidden clones.
Key Events
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The Lost Leader Returns — After being presumed dead, the future leader reappears and rescues the survivors. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Cole, Spitz
Location: Base escape route
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Submarine Pursuit — The survivors board a submarine, are pursued by Koda, and destroy his submarine. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Koda, Spitz
Location: Future ocean
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Cyborg Clone Exposed — Spitz notices abnormal behavior and discovers that the returning leader is a cyborg clone. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Spitz
Location: Returned submarine
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Clone Destroyed — Alan destroys the cyborg clone after its identity is exposed. Characters: Alan / John Deakins, Spitz
Location: 1997 submarine
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Deakins Returns Home — Deakins returns home after escaping the future conflict. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Deakins residence
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The Chip Changes Hands — The cyborg chip is secretly delivered to the hostile regime's surviving forces.
Location: Covert meeting place
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Cyborg Regime Confronted — An assassination attempt reveals that the apparent official is a cyborg clone before the real threat is killed.
Location: Government office
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Home Invasion — A traitor invades Deakins' home, and the ensuing fight kills both the attacker and Deakins' wife. Characters: Alan / John Deakins
Location: Deakins residence
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Spitz Interrogated — Spitz explains the events to skeptical officials during an interrogation. Characters: Spitz
Location: Government interrogation room
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Future Rebellion Survives — Spitz realizes that Marjorie can preserve the future rebellion despite the apparent timeline change. Characters: Marjorie, Spitz
Location: Interrogation room