Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Preparing Alice to Survive
Alice learns that the barn is empty and that the supplies in the house should last five years. Her father says she will eventually need to grow her own food and that the house is meant to help her survive.
Key Events
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The Barn Is Empty — Alice is told that the barn is empty. Characters: Alice
Location: Barn
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Five Years of Supplies — Her father says the supplies should last five years. Characters: Alice
Location: House
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A Future of Growing Food — Alice is told she will need to grow her own food afterward. Characters: Alice
Location: House
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The House Is Hers — Her father insists that the house and everything in it are for her survival. Characters: Alice
Location: House
The Farewell and Its Rules
Alice challenges the plan to seal the back of the house, but the disagreement gives way to a painful farewell. Her father asks her to repeat the rules for surviving alone and reassures her that she is ready.
Key Events
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Dispute Over the Back — Alice questions the plan to seal the back of the house. Characters: Alice
Location: House
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The Painful Farewell — Alice says she does not want her father to leave; he says he would stay if he could. Characters: Alice
Location: House
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The Survival Rules — Her father asks her to repeat the rules: trust no one, let no one in, and never leave. Characters: Alice
Location: House
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A Father's Reassurance — Alice admits she is scared, and her father tells her she is ready because she is his daughter. Characters: Alice
Location: House
A Stranger at the Door
After her father leaves, someone outside calls to Alice and promises not to hurt anyone. He says he has not eaten in weeks and asks for food, offering to leave afterward.
Key Events
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A Father's Reassurance — Alice admits she is scared, and her father tells her she is ready because she is his daughter. Characters: Alice
Location: House
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A Voice Outside — Someone outside calls to Alice and says he will not hurt her or anyone else. Characters: Alice
Location: Outside the house
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A Plea for Food — The stranger says he has not eaten in weeks and asks Alice for food. Characters: Alice
Location: Outside the house
Trust Remains Unresolved
The stranger argues that they should stick together rather than remain divided. Alice does not open the door in the dialogue shown, and the excerpt ends without revealing her decision or his fate.
Key Events
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An Appeal for Unity — The stranger argues that they should stick together against what has already beaten them. Characters: Alice
Location: Outside the house
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The Door Stays Closed — Alice does not open the door in the dialogue shown; the stranger keeps pleading. Characters: Alice
Location: House
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An Unanswered Request — The excerpt ends without resolving Alice's choice or the stranger's fate. Characters: Alice
Location: House