Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The False Stonehills
Steve and Diana rob the diamond company while posing as the expected Lord and Lady Stonehill. They kidnap Hugh Rand and carry the diamonds into the Calahari Desert.
Key Events
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Diamond Company Robbery — A gang steals diamonds worth $500,000 from an African diamond company. Characters: Steve, Diana
Location: African diamond company
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Stonehill Disguise — Steve and Diana pose as the expected Lord and Lady Stonehill. Characters: Steve, Diana
Location: African diamond company
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Manager Kidnapped — The thieves kidnap manager Hugh Rand and take him into the desert. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: African diamond company
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Into the Calahari Desert — The thieves, their captive, and their porters begin the desert trek. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
Greed Splits the Gang
The heat and lack of water strain the thieves. Three members demand their shares, but Steve deceives them with worthless glass and continues with Diana and Hugh.
Key Events
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Heat and Water Scarcity — Several days of sweltering heat make water the group's central concern. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Thieves Demand Their Shares — Three thieves decide to leave for Cape Town and demand their share. Characters: Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Glass Replaces Diamonds — Steve gives the departing thieves worthless glass instead of diamonds. Characters: Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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The Smaller Group Continues — Steve and Diana continue through the desert while keeping Hugh with them. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
The Desert Turns Hostile
The porters desert the group, forcing Hugh to become its guide. Deaths at a poisoned waterhole reveal the danger of Steve's methods and deepen the group's fear.
Key Events
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Porters Desert the Group — The native porters desert the travelers, leaving the thieves dependent on Hugh. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Hugh Becomes Their Guide — Hugh guides the group through the hostile desert after the porters leave. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Poisoned Waterhole Deaths — Two thieves die after drinking from a poisoned waterhole. Characters: Steve, Diana
Location: Poisoned waterhole
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Survivor Returns — Another thief returns, reports the deaths, and then succumbs himself. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Steve Admits Poisoning Water — Steve reveals that he poisoned the water to deter pursuit. Characters: Steve, Hugh Rand, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
Thirst and Temptation
Hugh romances Diana while Steve grows furious. As thirst becomes extreme, Diana offers diamonds, herself, and servitude for water, but Hugh rejects every bargain.
Key Events
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Hugh Romances Diana — Hugh romances Diana, increasing Steve's anger during the trek. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Thirst Intensifies — The group's worsening thirst makes every remaining supply critically valuable. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Diamonds Offered for Water — Diana first offers Hugh the diamonds in exchange for water. Characters: Hugh Rand, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Diana Offers Herself — Diana offers herself to Hugh for water, but he rejects the offer. Characters: Hugh Rand, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Diana Offers Servitude — Diana offers to become Hugh's slave, and he still refuses the exchange. Characters: Hugh Rand, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
The Circle Closes
The group reaches safe water, only to discover that Hugh has led them in a circle. Back at the office, Steve is exposed and removed, while Diana receives conditional freedom.
Key Events
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Safe Waterhole Reached — The travelers finally reach a safe waterhole after the prolonged desert ordeal. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Safe waterhole
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The Journey Was Circular — Hugh reveals through the route's outcome that he has led the group in a circle. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: Calahari Desert
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Return to the Office — The group ends up back at the diamond company office. Characters: Hugh Rand, Steve, Diana
Location: African diamond company office
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Steve Exposed — Steve is introduced to the real Lord and Lady Stonehill and exposed as an impostor. Characters: Steve
Location: African diamond company office
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Steve Taken Away — Steve is taken away after the deception is uncovered. Characters: Steve, Hugh Rand
Location: African diamond company office
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Diana's Conditional Freedom — Hugh frees Diana but requires daily reports for the rest of her life, then embraces her. Characters: Hugh Rand, Diana
Location: African diamond company office