Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Faith and Family Wounds
A religious rally frames the story's faith-centered setting. Mranda and Parker's marriage is burdened by their son's death, while Terry and Sandy hope to have a child.
Key Events
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Rally Against Same-Sex Marriage — A hymn and forceful protest introduce the religious and family setting.
Location: Religious rally
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A Marriage Marked by Loss — The couple's marriage remains strained after their son's death from Dietrich-Schygulla syndrome. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Parker Bliss, Sr.
Location: Bliss family home
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Parker's Self-Blame — Parker blames himself for his son's condition despite being told it is not genetic. Characters: Parker Bliss, Sr.
Location: Bliss family home
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A Couple Hopes for a Child — Terry and Sandy hope to have a child. Characters: Terry Price-Owens, Sandy Price-Owens
Location: Boston
A Secret Surrogacy Plan
Mranda believes she has been called to carry a baby for Terry and Sandy, but she does not tell Parker. She contacts Terry and invites him to visit.
Key Events
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Mranda's Surrogacy Conviction — Mranda believes the Lord has called her to carry a baby for Terry and Sandy. Characters: Mranda Bliss
Location: Bliss family home
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Mranda Contacts Terry — Mranda contacts Terry and invites him to visit without first telling Parker. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Terry Price-Owens
Location: Not specified
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Terry's Unexpected Arrival — Terry's arrival surprises Parker, and Mranda struggles to explain his presence. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Parker Bliss, Sr., Terry Price-Owens
Location: Bliss family home
The Truth Comes Out
Terry's arrival surprises Parker, and Mranda struggles to explain the situation. Parker eventually demands the truth and learns that Mranda is carrying a baby for another couple.
Key Events
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Lucy Meets Terry — Mranda introduces Terry to Lucy as the prospective father of the baby she is carrying. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Terry Price-Owens, Lucy Dexter
Location: Not specified
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Secrecy Deepens Marital Tension — The concealed arrangement and confusion threaten to worsen Mranda and Parker's marriage. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Parker Bliss, Sr., Terry Price-Owens
Location: Bliss family home
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Parker Demands the Truth — Parker confronts Mranda, who tells him the baby is not theirs and that she is a surrogate. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Parker Bliss, Sr.
Location: Bliss family home
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Parker Rejects Her Justification — Parker is furious that Mranda invoked the Lord to justify her decision. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Parker Bliss, Sr.
Location: Bliss family home
Grief and Separate Pleas
Parker is angry about Mranda's religious justification, and Terry admits he is not a chef. Terry and Parker discuss grief, while Terry also tries to reconnect with Sandy and Lucy presses Tom for commitment.
Key Events
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Terry Admits a Misrepresentation — Terry admits he is not a chef, adding to the sense that the situation was presented misleadingly. Characters: Terry Price-Owens
Location: Not specified
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Terry and Parker Discuss Grief — The two men talk about grief and the effects of the family's experience with the disease. Characters: Terry Price-Owens, Parker Bliss, Sr.
Location: Not specified
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Terry Calls Sandy — Terry tries to reconnect with Sandy by phone. Characters: Terry Price-Owens, Sandy Price-Owens
Location: Not specified
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Lucy Presses Tom — Lucy demands that Tom commit and warns she may leave for a North Dakota transfer. Characters: Lucy Dexter, Tom Dexter
Location: Not specified
A Celebration in Uncertainty
As the pregnancy advances, Mranda and Lucy prepare for a baby shower. Parker remains apart from Mranda, though small gestures leave the possibility of reconciliation open.
Key Events
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Preparing for the Baby Shower — As the pregnancy advances, Mranda and Lucy prepare for a baby shower. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Lucy Dexter
Location: Not specified
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Small Gestures Before the Celebration — Parker remains apart from Mranda, but small gestures leave reconciliation uncertain as the celebration approaches. Characters: Mranda Bliss, Parker Bliss, Sr.
Location: Not specified
The story centers on a religiously conservative, married southern woman who receives a message from God instructing her to act as a surrogate mother and carry a child for two married gay men who live in Boston - a Jewish doctor and and African-American dance choreographer. All Hell breaks loose when the African American man comes to her home down south to micro-manage her pregnancy, and he won't leave.