Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Storm Behind the Window
Ellen reports seeing a murdered man in the deserted house during a violent storm. Police find nothing, while fresh Laburnum trees create a new suspicion.
Key Events
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Bodies Seen Through Window — During a thunderstorm, Ellen claims she sees a man with a slit throat in the deserted house. Characters: Ellen Wheeler
Location: Ellen's living room
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Deserted House Search — Police search the house but find no evidence of a murder. Characters: Inspector Walker
Location: Old deserted house
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Fresh Laburnum Bed — Ellen notices freshly planted Laburnum and suspects a body is buried beneath it. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Appleby
Location: Garden beside the old house
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Appleby Admits Planting Trees — Appleby says he planted the trees during the storm but refuses permission to dig. Characters: Appleby, Inspector Walker
Location: Garden beside the old house
The Investigation Fades
Appleby admits planting the trees but blocks a search of the garden. Further sightings, an arrest, and an excavation still fail to produce evidence.
Key Events
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Trauma History Revealed — Ellen's breakdown and recurring nightmares are connected to her first husband's fatal car accident. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Tony
Location: Ellen's home
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Skepticism Takes Hold — Sarah suggests Ellen may be seeing what she expects because of her recent breakdown. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Sarah Cooke
Location: Ellen's home
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Moving Light Spotted — Ellen and Sarah see a moving light behind the old house's shutters and call police. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Sarah Cooke
Location: Ellen's home
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Appleby Arrested — Police find Appleby wandering near the house and arrest him for trespassing. Characters: Appleby, Inspector Walker
Location: Old deserted house
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Second Search Finds Nothing — A second search and garden excavation produce no evidence of bodies. Characters: Inspector Walker
Location: Old deserted house and garden
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Case Officially Closed — Walker privately tells Ellen's household that the investigation is officially closed. Characters: Inspector Walker
Location: Ellen's home
A Mind Under Suspicion
Ellen reports a second body and is treated as mentally unstable by those around her. Tony recommends a Swiss clinic after hearing about her traumatic past.
Key Events
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Case Officially Closed — Walker privately tells Ellen's household that the investigation is officially closed. Characters: Inspector Walker
Location: Ellen's home
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Second Body Reported — Ellen claims she has seen another body, this time a woman, inside the old house. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Sarah Cooke
Location: Ellen's home
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Ellen Is Sedated — Sarah and the unnamed husband sedate Ellen because they believe she is mentally deteriorating. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Sarah Cooke
Location: Ellen's home
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Clinic Recommendation — Tony advises Ellen to spend several weeks in a Swiss clinic, and she agrees. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Tony
Location: Tony's office
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DIPCO Ownership Revealed — Walker reveals that DIPCO purchased the old house six months earlier. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Inspector Walker
Location: Ellen's home
The Hidden Ownership
Ellen learns that the old house belongs to DIPCO and notices the connection in financial documents. A key convinces her that the apparent conspiracy is real.
Key Events
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DIPCO Ownership Revealed — Walker reveals that DIPCO purchased the old house six months earlier. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Inspector Walker
Location: Ellen's home
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Financial Documents Signed — Ellen signs documents granting financial authority before noticing the recent DIPCO acquisition. Characters: Ellen Wheeler
Location: Ellen's home
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Key Exposes the Plan — Ellen discovers the DIPCO connection and reveals that she possesses a key to the old house. Characters: Ellen Wheeler
Location: Ellen's home
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Flight to the Old House — Ellen runs to the house, letting herself inside while the others chase after her. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Sarah Cooke
Location: Street leading to the old house
Murder Made Visible
Ellen leads the others into the old house and kills Sarah and the unnamed husband. She arranges the bodies to match her earlier fabricated visions.
Key Events
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Flight to the Old House — Ellen runs to the house, letting herself inside while the others chase after her. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Sarah Cooke
Location: Street leading to the old house
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Deaths Recreate the Vision — Ellen slashes one victim and stabs Sarah, then positions the bodies as previously described. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Sarah Cooke
Location: Second-floor room in the old house
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Feigning Insanity Revealed — The story reveals that Ellen fabricated the sightings to conceal and facilitate the murders. Characters: Ellen Wheeler
Location: Old deserted house
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Appleby Agrees to Silence — Appleby congratulates Ellen, promises not to report the murders, and agrees to watch the property. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Appleby
Location: Ellen's house and garden
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Ellen Departs — Ellen says goodbye to Appleby and leaves after securing his cooperation. Characters: Ellen Wheeler, Appleby
Location: Ellen's house