Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Fall from Grace
Two respected bank employees lose their jobs to technology and struggle with their new reality.
Key Events
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Job Loss — Both men lose jobs to technological advancement Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green, George Peterson
Location: Bank
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Casual Conversation — Share frustrations over job losses Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Local bar
The Robin Hood Scheme
The former colleagues discover a way to use their knowledge to help others while taking from the rich.
Key Events
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Casual Conversation — Share frustrations over job losses Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Local bar
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Inactive Accounts Discovery — Find untouched accounts with small balances Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Bank records
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Scheme Planning — Develop computerized access plan Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Max's home
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First Anonymous Check — Send first money to deserving family Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green, Husband
Location: Post office
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Scheme Expansion — Increase scale of money distribution Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Computer room
The Tightening Noose
As their operation grows, so does the risk of detection from bank authorities and law enforcement.
Key Events
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Scheme Expansion — Increase scale of money distribution Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Computer room
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Suspicion Arises — Bank officials notice irregularities Characters: Garland Dean, Chuck McCallister, Whitlow
Location: Bank office
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Moral Dilemma — Debate continuing illegal operation Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Safe house
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Close Call — Narrow escape from detection Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green, Deputy
Location: Bank parking lot
The Final Stand
The duo completes their mission and faces the inevitable consequences of their illegal but well-intentioned actions.
Key Events
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Close Call — Narrow escape from detection Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green, Deputy
Location: Bank parking lot
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Final Distribution — Complete their Robin Hood mission Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green
Location: Multiple locations
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Confrontation with Authorities — Face consequences of their actions Characters: Max Shepherd, Sam Green, Garland Dean, Whitlow
Location: Bank
Two former bank employees, executive Dick Van Dyke, forced into early retirement by a computer, and guard Sid Caesar, unceremoniously dismissed before his pension comes due, concoct a computerized scheme to steal from the rich (i.e. the bank) and give to the poor with anonymous checks (money accessed from inactive accounts) to average do-gooders.