Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Weekend Without Attention
A child visits his father for the weekend and finds that his father is too busy to notice him. This neglect creates the emotional problem driving the story.
Key Events
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Weekend Visit Begins — A child visits his father for the weekend.
Location: Father's home
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Father Is Busy — The child's father is too busy to notice him.
Location: Father's home
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Family History Discovered — The child discovers that his grandfather was a touring vaudeville performer.
Location: Father's home
A Vaudeville Revelation
The child discovers that his grandfather was a touring vaudeville performer. The family discovery provides a connection to performance and filmmaking.
Key Events
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Family History Discovered — The child discovers that his grandfather was a touring vaudeville performer.
Location: Father's home
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Attention Is Denied — The father's lack of attention leaves the child frustrated.
Location: Father's home
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Acting Out Begins — The child acts out because his father does not notice him.
Location: Father's home
The Stolen Camera
Frustrated by his father's inattention, the child acts out and steals his father's camera. This decision turns his frustration into a concrete filmmaking plan.
Key Events
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Acting Out Begins — The child acts out because his father does not notice him.
Location: Father's home
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Camera Is Stolen — The child steals his father's camera.
Location: Father's home
Friends Behind The Camera
The child joins with his friends to make a film using the stolen camera. The project becomes a deliberate attempt to gain his father's attention.
Key Events
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Friends Join In — The child works with his friends on a film.
Location: Unspecified filming location
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Film Production Starts — The group uses the stolen camera to make a film.
Location: Unspecified filming location
A Film For Attention
The filmmaking effort expresses the child's need to be noticed by his father. The story culminates in this attempt to connect through a created film.
Key Events
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Film Becomes A Message — The film becomes an effort to gain the father's attention.
Location: Unspecified filming location
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Attention Seeking Culminates — The child's filmmaking effort reaches its intended goal of seeking attention.
Location: Unspecified location