Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Payroll Betrayal
A secret Union payroll train is raided, and a close friend is killed. The pursuit reveals that the Confederates received precise information from hidden Union traitors.
Key Events
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Payroll Train Raid — Confederate forces raid a secret Union payroll train.
Location: Union payroll train
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Friend Killed — A Union officer loses his close friend during the raid.
Location: Payroll train
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Evidence of Treason — The raid's precision suggests that Union traitors supplied transport information.
Location: Union pursuit route
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Officer Captured — The pursuit scatters the Union squad until its officer is captured.
Location: Confederate pursuit route
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Forced Escort — The captors demand guidance past Union camps.
Location: Confederate-held route
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False Safe Route — The captive secretly leads the Confederates toward a Union camp.
Location: Union camp perimeter
Respect After War
The captured Confederate leaders are deceived into entering a Union camp. After the war, their mutual respect allows them to share a physical description of the suspected traitors.
Key Events
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False Safe Route — The captive secretly leads the Confederates toward a Union camp.
Location: Union camp perimeter
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Camp Alarm — He raises the alarm, causing the Confederate leaders to be captured.
Location: Union camp
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Treasoners Withheld — The captured men refuse to identify the people who sold the information.
Location: Union camp
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Postwar Release — After the war, the former Confederate prisoners are released.
Location: Release point
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A Code of War — The Union officer explains that he distinguishes warfare from treason.
Location: Release point
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Physical Description — The former Confederates provide only a physical description of the traitors.
Location: Release point
Justice Arrives In Town
A murder report brings the investigation to Blackthorne. Shasta identifies the killer, and the resulting shootout reveals a connection to the old treason investigation.
Key Events
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Call From Blackthorne — A later message summons the investigator to Blackthorne.
Location: Blackthorne, Texas
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Murder Reported — Shasta reports that her employer was murdered by a Rio Lobo deputy. Characters: Shasta Delaney
Location: Blackthorne
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Posse Identified — Shasta identifies the posse leader as the murderer she reported. Characters: Shasta Delaney
Location: Blackthorne hotel
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Tabletop Shootout — Shasta shoots the posse leader from beneath a table, starting a firefight. Characters: Shasta Delaney
Location: Blackthorne hotel
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Traitor Recognized — The dead posse leader is recognized as one of the suspected traitors. Characters: Shasta Delaney
Location: Blackthorne hotel
Land Under Siege
The investigation reaches Rio Lobo, where ranchers live under a corrupt sheriff and stolen land deeds. Phillips supports the attempt to challenge Ketcham's control.
Key Events
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Land Theft Exposed — Ketcham's theft of ranchers' land and control of local officials are exposed. Characters: Phillips, Ketcham
Location: Rio Lobo
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Hidden Allies — Allies hide from the sheriff's men while a distraction draws attention away. Characters: Shasta Delaney
Location: Rio Lobo
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Ranch Infiltration — Phillips assists an infiltration of Ketcham's ranch. Characters: Phillips, Ketcham
Location: Ketcham's ranch
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Traitor Unmasked — Ketcham is revealed to be the second Union traitor. Characters: Ketcham
Location: Ketcham's ranch
The Corrupt Order Falls
Ketcham is exposed, compelled to restore the deeds, and then killed by the sheriff. The sheriff's forces fail to destroy the resistance, and Shasta delivers the final blow.
Key Events
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Deeds Restored — Ketcham is forced to sign the deeds back to their rightful owners. Characters: Phillips, Ketcham
Location: Ketcham's ranch
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Hostage Exchange — Ketcham is held hostage during negotiations for a captured ally. Characters: Ketcham
Location: Rio Lobo jail area
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Boss Betrayed — The sheriff kills Ketcham after learning that the stolen deeds were restored. Characters: Ketcham
Location: Rio Lobo
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Cantina Attack Fails — An attempt to destroy the allies' cantina base fails.
Location: Rio Lobo cantina
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Townspeople Counterattack — The townspeople rally and outflank the sheriff's remaining men. Characters: Shasta Delaney
Location: Rio Lobo
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Sheriff's Final Defeat — A rifle misfires, and Shasta shoots the fleeing sheriff. Characters: Shasta Delaney
Location: Rio Lobo outskirts