Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Initial Encounters
Max and Kia navigate daily life while Max meets Ely. Their first date leads to a kiss that is abruptly interrupted by a phone call, introducing underlying relationship complexities.
Key Events
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Coffee Shop Introduction — Max and Kia spend time together, establishing their daily routine. Characters: Max, Kia
Location: Chicago Coffee Shop
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Film Date Initiation — Max and Ely attend a film together after initial flirtation. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Cinema
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First Kiss Interrupted — Max and Ely kiss before a phone call from Ely's partner disrupts the moment. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Chicago Coffee Shop — The initial setting where Max and Kia spend time. Characters: Max, Kia
Location: Coffee Shop
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Long Braided Hair — Ely's initial appearance that Max initially dismisses. Characters: Ely
Location: Various
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Kate's Phone Call — The call interrupts Max and Ely's intimate moment. Characters: Ely
Location: Ely's Apartment
Shifting Dynamics
Ely transforms her appearance, altering social perceptions. Evy faces a harsh confrontation at her family home, leading to her displacement and search for shelter.
Key Events
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First Kiss Interrupted — Max and Ely kiss before a phone call from Ely's partner disrupts the moment. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Ely's Haircut — Ely shaves her long braids into a short butch style. Characters: Ely
Location: Barbershop
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Bookstore Re-encounter — Max barely recognizes Ely due to her dramatic new hairstyle. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Bookstore
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Kate's Phone Call — The call interrupts Max and Ely's intimate moment. Characters: Ely
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Short Butch Haircut — Ely's new look that changes how Max perceives her. Characters: Ely
Location: Barbershop
Crisis and Reunion
Evy finds refuge with Max and Kia. Meanwhile, Max and Ely reconnect at a dinner party, reigniting their romantic spark through shared games and conversations.
Key Events
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Evy's Family Confrontation — Evy faces her mother and ex-husband Junior over her sexuality and past. Characters: Evy
Location: Evy's Family Home
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Evy's Displacement — Evy's mother throws her out, forcing her to flee the house. Characters: Evy
Location: Evy's Family Home
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Safe Haven Offered — Max invites Evy to move in after she arrives at their door. Characters: Max, Kia, Evy
Location: Kia's Apartment
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Dinner Party Hosted — Ely and Daria host a gathering for their friend group. Characters: Ely, Daria
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Junior's Presence — Evy's ex-husband is found waiting at her childhood home. Characters: Evy
Location: Evy's Family Home
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Mother's Rejection — Evy's mother acts on claims and expels her from the house. Characters: Evy
Location: Evy's Family Home
Intimate Resolution
Phone calls clear past misunderstandings. Max and Ely share a second date that deepens into physical intimacy, culminating in a montage of their blossoming relationship.
Key Events
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Dinner Party Hosted — Ely and Daria host a gathering for their friend group. Characters: Ely, Daria
Location: Ely's Apartment
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I Never Game — Friends play a candid truth game, sparking Max and Ely's reconnection. Characters: Max, Ely, Daria
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Second Kiss — Max and Ely share another kiss after making plans to go out. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Phone Confessions — Ely reveals her relationship status with Kate over multiple calls. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Various Locations
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Second Date — Max and Ely meet for a second date, leading to intimacy. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Intimate Foreplay — Trimming fingernails escalates into physical intimacy. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Ely's Apartment
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Relationship Blossoming — Closing credits show the developing bond between Max and Ely. Characters: Max, Ely
Location: Montage Locations
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I Never Truths — The game reveals personal histories and reignites Max and Ely's spark. Characters: Max, Ely, Daria
Location: Ely's Apartment
Max is a trendy, pretty, young lesbian, who is having trouble finding love. A friend sets her up with Ely, whom Max likes, but Ely is frumpy, homely, and older. Nor do they have much in common. Can Max learn to look past the packaging?