Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Quarantine and an Uneasy Return
Terese struggles with isolation after graduation while neglecting her cystic fibrosis treatments. Amanda's unexpected return disrupts Terese's routine and brings the strain between the roommates into focus.
Key Events
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Isolation After Graduation — During quarantine, Terese struggles with isolation after graduating and her roommates leave. Characters: Terese
Location: Terese's home
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Neglected Treatments — Terese avoids treatments that help manage her cystic fibrosis. Characters: Terese
Location: Terese's home
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Amanda Returns — Amanda returns unexpectedly after a break with her boyfriend. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
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Uneasy Reunion — Terese is unsettled by Amanda's unannounced return as they adjust to living together again. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
Conflicting Ideas of Care
Terese and Amanda argue about pandemic precautions and Terese's smoking and missed treatments. Terese explains the potentially lasting danger COVID poses to her lungs, while Amanda shares that her relationship is in trouble.
Key Events
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COVID Precaution Dispute — Terese challenges Amanda's decision to go out to eat during the pandemic. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
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Health Habits Challenged — Amanda counters that Terese smokes and skips treatments despite her condition. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
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Risk of Lung Damage — Terese explains that COVID could permanently damage her lungs even if she survived. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
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Amanda's Troubled Relationship — Amanda admits her relationship is in trouble and she cannot simply return to her boyfriend's home. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
Distraction and Declining Health
Terese seeks distraction through television, music, painting, and decorating furniture. Her cough grows harder to ignore, but she continues postponing treatment until severe symptoms develop.
Key Events
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Amanda's Troubled Relationship — Amanda admits her relationship is in trouble and she cannot simply return to her boyfriend's home. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
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Everyday Distractions — Terese turns to television, music, painting, and decorating furniture for distraction. Characters: Terese
Location: Terese's home
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Coughing Worsens — Terese's coughing becomes harder to ignore while she continues putting off treatment. Characters: Terese
Location: Terese's home
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Fever and Chest Pressure — Terese develops a fever, chest pressure, tingling hands, and worsening symptoms. Characters: Terese
Location: Terese's home
Illness Forces Honesty
After passing out, Terese calls an on-call doctor and is urged to seek an examination and another COVID test. Amanda learns she has been sick, and the roommates begin discussing the breakup, their distance, and Terese's difficulty talking about cystic fibrosis.
Key Events
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Terese Passes Out — Terese passes out as her symptoms worsen. Characters: Terese
Location: Terese's home
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Call to On-Call Doctor — Terese calls an on-call doctor, who urges her to seek examination and another COVID test. Characters: Terese
Location: Terese's home
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Amanda Learns of Illness — Amanda learns Terese has been sick; Terese says she told only Syd. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
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Conversation About Distance — Amanda explains she feared making the breakup real by discussing it, and Terese acknowledges her lack of understanding. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home
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Unfinished Cystic Fibrosis Talk — Terese begins explaining why she has struggled to talk about her condition; their conversation remains underway. Characters: Terese, Amanda
Location: Shared home