Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Voyage for Delivery
Susan joins Jason and three other young crew members to deliver a 60-foot sailing yacht from San Diego to Vancouver. The voyage begins with a clear commercial objective.
Key Events
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Delivery Proposal — Susan agrees to help deliver the yacht to a potential buyer in Vancouver. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: San Diego
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Crew Joins Voyage — Susan travels with Jason and three other young crew members. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: San Diego
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Yacht Departure — The crew begins the planned trip from San Diego toward Vancouver. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: San Diego harbor
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Buyer Delivery Mission — The crew's objective is to deliver the yacht to a potential buyer. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: At sea
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Captain Takes Command — The over-anxious captain directs the yacht during the voyage. Characters: Jason, Susan Clarkson
Location: On the yacht
The Course Goes Wrong
The captain sails off course while the yacht is at sea. Bad weather then places the crew and their delivery mission under increasing pressure.
Key Events
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Course Deviation — The captain sails the yacht off course. Characters: Jason, Susan Clarkson
Location: At sea
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Weather Deteriorates — The off-course crew encounters bad weather. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: At sea
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Storm Struggle — The crew struggles against worsening conditions at sea. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: On the yacht
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Yacht Begins Sinking — The sailing yacht sinks during the maritime crisis. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: At sea
The Yacht Goes Under
The crew struggles against the worsening conditions before the yacht sinks. They are forced to depend on a dinghy instead of the sailing yacht.
Key Events
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Crew Abandons Yacht — The crew is forced away from the sinking yacht. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: At sea
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Dinghy Survival — Susan, Jason, and the crew remain trapped aboard the dinghy. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea
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Supplies Disappear — The stranded crew is left without essential supplies. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea
Stranded Without Supplies
Trapped in the dinghy, the crew discovers that they have no food, water, or supplies. Their situation changes from a voyage to an immediate survival ordeal.
Key Events
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Food Shortage — The crew faces survival without food. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea
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Water Shortage — The crew must endure the open sea without water. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea
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Merciless Elements — The stranded crew contends with merciless maritime elements. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Open sea
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Sharks Appear — Sharks pose a constant threat around the dinghy. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea
Sharks in Open Water
The crew remains exposed to merciless elements while sharks create a constant surrounding threat. Susan, Jason, and the other crew members must continue enduring the open sea.
Key Events
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Survival Pressure — The crew struggles to survive amid hunger, thirst, exposure, and sharks. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea
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Trapped Together — Susan and Jason remain confined with the crew in the small dinghy. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea
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Open-Sea Ordeal — The crew continues facing the combined dangers of the open sea. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Open sea
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Fate of the Crew — The crew's survival remains centered on enduring the sea and its threats. Characters: Susan Clarkson, Jason
Location: Dinghy at sea