Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Injury Without Memory
After an opening conversation and a tense scene near a train, Allex celebrates an anniversary and wakes injured with no memory of what happened. The emergency room offers an explanation that does not satisfy Allex.
Key Events
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Distress at Arrival — The story opens with a conversation about someone's distress upon arriving.
Location: An unspecified place
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Train-side Tension — A tense scene unfolds near an approaching train.
Location: Near an approaching train
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Anniversary Celebration — Allex celebrates an anniversary before waking with an unexplained head injury. Characters: Allex
Location: Unspecified
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Unexplained Head Injury — Allex wakes with a head injury and no memory of how it happened. Characters: Allex
Location: Unspecified
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Emergency Room Explanation — The Doctor says Allex arrived drunk after a bar fight and received stitches. Characters: Allex, Doctor
Location: Emergency room
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Concern Dismissed — Allex insists something is wrong, but the staff dismisses the concern. Characters: Allex, Doctor
Location: Emergency room
Blackouts and Evidence
A stranger's claim and The Man's apparent influence deepen Allex's uncertainty. Footage and monitoring efforts raise the possibility that Allex is being made to commit violent acts.
Key Events
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Stranger's Claim — A stranger claims to have acted at Allex's request, which Allex cannot remember. Characters: Allex
Location: Unspecified
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The Man Appears — During Allex's blackouts, The Man speaks as if he can influence Allex's actions. Characters: Allex, The Man
Location: Unspecified
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Footage of a Killing — A technically skilled friend examines footage that seems to show Allex committing a killing. Characters: Allex
Location: Unspecified
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Possible Brain Implant — The friend suspects an implant may be sending signals and sets up monitoring tools. Characters: Allex
Location: Unspecified
The Experiment Exposed
Allex fears another killing, and The Man describes using blackouts, commands, and brain stimulation in an experiment. He invokes his grandfather's beliefs while preparing a lobotomy.
Key Events
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Fear of Another Killing — Allex finds evidence of another violent act and fears having killed a boss. Characters: Allex
Location: Unspecified
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Experiment Revealed — The Man claims Allex's body committed the acts under his commands and brain stimulation. Characters: Allex, The Man
Location: Unspecified
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Lobotomy Prepared — The Man explains his justification and prepares to perform a lobotomy on Allex. Characters: Allex, The Man
Location: Unspecified
Resistance and Uncertain Escape
Allex resists The Man and asserts that the procedure has not erased their memories or resolve. In the desert, Allex asks the friend to leave together, but the friend refuses, leaving what happens next unresolved.
Key Events
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Allex Resists — Allex says the procedure did not erase their memories or resolve and declares an intention to kill The Man. Characters: Allex, The Man
Location: Unspecified
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Desert-side Departure Refused — Allex contacts the friend by a stuck car, mentions an ice pick, and asks to leave together; the friend refuses. Characters: Allex
Location: Desert