Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Collision Without Witnesses
Brandi drives after drinking and taking MDMA, then hits a pedestrian and leaves him trapped in her windshield. Fear of arrest overrides her promise to seek help.
Key Events
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Eviction and Unemployment — An unemployed man loses his benefits and is evicted from his apartment.
Location: Providence
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Brandi Celebrates — Brandi celebrates a possible promotion with drinking and MDMA before driving home. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Brandi's home
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The Car Strikes — Brandi's car hits a pedestrian, trapping him in the windshield. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Road
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Promise of Help — Brandi promises to get help but continues driving because she fears arrest. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Car
The Garage Becomes a Trap
Brandi abandons the injured victim in her garage and goes to work by taxi. Several possible rescuers fail to understand or respond to the danger.
Key Events
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Abandoned in Garage — Brandi leaves the injured victim trapped in her garage and takes a taxi to work. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
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Horn for Attention — The trapped victim repeatedly sounds the horn to attract attention.
Location: Garage
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Escape from Glass — The victim painfully pulls himself away from a shard of windshield glass.
Location: Garage
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A Child Notices — A young neighbor notices the victim, but his family refuses to become involved.
Location: Neighboring home
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Missed Canine Alert — A dog finds the scene, but its owner mistakes the situation for garbage trouble.
Location: Garage entrance
A Murderous Cover-Up
Brandi recruits Rashid, who claims experience disposing of people. Together they restrain the victim and plan to burn the body and the car.
Key Events
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Rashid Is Recruited — Brandi enlists Rashid to help kill and dispose of the trapped victim. Characters: Brandi Boski, Rashid
Location: Brandi's house
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Criminal Experience Revealed — Rashid claims that he has disposed of people before. Characters: Rashid
Location: Brandi's house
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Victim Leaves Windshield — The victim pulls free from the windshield and attempts to escape the garage.
Location: Garage
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Escape Is Blocked — Brandi and Rashid restrain the victim before he can leave. Characters: Brandi Boski, Rashid
Location: Garage
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Burning the Evidence — They decide to kill the victim and burn both the body and the car. Characters: Brandi Boski, Rashid
Location: Brandi's house
The Victim Fights Back
Rashid attempts to shoot the apparently unconscious victim, but the victim kills him with a concealed pen. Brandi then pursues the escaping survivor with a hammer.
Key Events
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The Revolver Attack — Rashid prepares to shoot the apparently unconscious victim. Characters: Rashid
Location: Garage
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Pen Against Rashid — The victim secretly awakens and stabs Rashid through the eye with a concealed pen. Characters: Rashid
Location: Garage
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Gunshot in the Garage — A shot is discharged during the struggle, prompting Brandi to investigate. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
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Car Escape Attempt — The victim tries to start the car, but Brandi enters before he can drive away. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
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Brandi's Hammer Pursuit — The victim escapes toward the street, while Brandi pursues him with a garage hammer. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Street outside garage
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Dragged Back Inside — Brandi subdues the victim, drags him back, and begins covering the garage with gasoline. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
Fire and Final Choice
The victim pins Brandi with the car and briefly considers killing her, but spares her. Brandi fires the revolver, igniting the gasoline and causing the fatal fire.
Key Events
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Dragged Back Inside — Brandi subdues the victim, drags him back, and begins covering the garage with gasoline. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
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Car Pins Brandi — The victim restarts the car and pins Brandi against the back of the garage. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
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A Plea for Mercy — Brandi begs for her life as the victim holds a lit match and asks why she did not help him. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
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The Gun Reappears — Brandi produces Rashid's revolver and fires, while the stray bullet ignites the gasoline. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Garage
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Escape from the Fire — Brandi burns to death as the injured victim opens the garage door and collapses outside. Characters: Brandi Boski
Location: Driveway
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Neighbors Arrive — Neighbors gather after the fire, help the survivor away, and surround the burning garage.
Location: Driveway