Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Fear At The Kelly Home
Billy is pursued by Lars and returns to a home dominated by Tom's violence. His mother's explanation connects Lars's disturbance to an earlier death.
Key Events
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Lars Pursues Billy — Billy is pursued by Lars near the forest and returns home terrified. Characters: Billy Kelly, Lars Hoeglin
Location: Forest
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Billy Reaches Home — Billy returns home frightened after encountering Lars. Characters: Billy Kelly, Tom Kelly
Location: Kelly home
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Family History Revealed — Billy's mother explains that Lars changed after his brother's death. Characters: Billy Kelly
Location: Kelly home
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Tom Beats Billy — Tom beats Billy while his mother tries to intervene. Characters: Billy Kelly, Tom Kelly
Location: Kelly home
Healing And Forbidden Hope
Billy starts factory work, meets Alice, and encounters John Reese's unconventional healing practices. The remedy and protective symbols give Billy a fragile sense of control.
Key Events
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Factory Employment — Billy begins factory work and meets Alice Spangler. Characters: Billy Kelly, Alice Spangler
Location: Factory
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Billy Meets Alice — Billy and Alice grow close while sharing difficult lives. Characters: Billy Kelly, Alice Spangler
Location: Factory
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John Offers A Remedy — John gives Billy a remedy intended for Tom's illness. Characters: John Reese, Billy Kelly, Tom Kelly
Location: Unspecified setting
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Protective Hexagrams — John asks Billy to draw hexagrams for protection. Characters: John Reese, Billy Kelly
Location: Unspecified setting
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Tom Becomes Sick — Tom becomes violently sick, making Billy believe the treatment is working. Characters: Billy Kelly, Tom Kelly
Location: Kelly home
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John Teaches Healing — John introduces Billy to religious ideas about healing and protection. Characters: John Reese, Billy Kelly
Location: Unspecified setting
A Future In Philadelphia
Billy and Alice develop a romance while Billy also comforts Clay. Alice's decision to leave forces Billy to choose a future beyond his home.
Key Events
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Secret Romance Begins — Billy and Alice secretly explore an abandoned house and imagine a future. Characters: Billy Kelly, Alice Spangler
Location: Abandoned house
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Billy Comforts Clay — Billy comforts Clay after the death of Clay's pet. Characters: Billy Kelly, Clay Myers
Location: Unspecified setting
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Alice Chooses Philadelphia — Alice says she will leave for Philadelphia with or without Billy. Characters: Billy Kelly, Alice Spangler
Location: Unspecified setting
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Billy Plans To Leave — Billy decides to leave for Philadelphia with Alice. Characters: Billy Kelly, Alice Spangler
Location: Unspecified setting
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Billy Thanks John — Billy gives John his savings in gratitude before leaving. Characters: Billy Kelly, John Reese
Location: Unspecified setting
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John Gives The Book — John gives Billy a book said to protect against visible and invisible enemies. Characters: John Reese, Billy Kelly
Location: Unspecified setting
The Hex Strikes Back
John is attacked by an unseen force after giving Billy the protective book. Rufus identifies the injury as the result of a powerful hex.
Key Events
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Unseen Attack — An unseen force attacks John and leaves him severely injured. Characters: John Reese
Location: Unspecified building
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Rufus Names The Hex — Rufus tells John that a powerful hex caused the attack. Characters: John Reese, Rufus
Location: Unspecified building
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Mam Isobel's Ritual — John attends Mam Isobel's ritual to identify the attacking spirit. Characters: John Reese, Rufus, Mam Isobel
Location: Mam Isobel's ritual
The Face Behind The Violence
At Mam Isobel's ritual, Billy describes the attacker and John recognizes Lars. John's recollection of the Hoeglin history leads to a final identification, while the confrontation remains unseen.
Key Events
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Mam Isobel's Ritual — John attends Mam Isobel's ritual to identify the attacking spirit. Characters: John Reese, Rufus, Mam Isobel
Location: Mam Isobel's ritual
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Billy Describes The Face — Billy describes a tall man with a thin face and staring eyes. Characters: Billy Kelly, John Reese, Mam Isobel
Location: Mam Isobel's ritual
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John Draws Lars — John draws the described face and recognizes Lars Hoeglin. Characters: John Reese, Billy Kelly, Lars Hoeglin
Location: Mam Isobel's ritual
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The Hoeglin History — John recalls Lars's brother confronting Irwin over cattle and dying afterward. Characters: John Reese, Lars Hoeglin, Irwin Myers
Location: Unspecified setting
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Lars Identified As Attacker — John identifies Lars as the attacker as people demand the building be opened. Characters: John Reese, Lars Hoeglin, Billy Kelly, Rufus, Mam Isobel
Location: Unspecified building
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Confrontation Remains Unshown — The story ends before the final confrontation or its consequences are shown. Characters: John Reese, Lars Hoeglin
Location: Unspecified building