Plot Analysis Summary
An isolated office worker constructs a heroic fantasy that ultimately exposes his despair, violent impulses, and longing to be noticed.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Invisible Employee
Bob is an alienated office worker who fantasizes about killing his coworkers. A workplace shooting appears to let him become the hero he never believed he could be.
Key Events
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Bob Imagines Office Murders — Bob fantasizes about murdering his coworkers while feeling invisible and insignificant. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
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A Terrible Office Day — Bob reaches a breaking point during an especially bad day at work. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
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Coleman Starts Shooting — Ralf Coleman appears to attack the office and kill several people. Characters: Bob Maconel, Ralf Coleman
Location: Office
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Bob Shoots Coleman — Bob uses his planned weapon to shoot Coleman dead. Characters: Bob Maconel, Ralf Coleman
Location: Office
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Bob Saves the Executive — Bob finds a wounded executive and saves her life after the shooting. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
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Unexpected Public Hero — Bob becomes publicly celebrated as a hero by people he wanted to kill. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
A Hero Under Watch
Gene Shelby promotes Bob after the shooting, surrounding him with status and management privileges. Bob's apparent rescue of a wounded executive brings him into a disturbing emotional crisis.
Key Events
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Unexpected Public Hero — Bob becomes publicly celebrated as a hero by people he wanted to kill. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
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Shelby Promotes Bob — Gene Shelby promotes Bob to Vice President of Creative Thinking and grants management privileges. Characters: Bob Maconel, Gene Shelby
Location: Corporate office
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A Desperate Request — The wounded executive, now quadriplegic, first curses Bob and then asks him to end her suffering. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Hospital
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The Subway Proposal — She asks Bob to let her roll toward an oncoming train. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Subway platform
Love Against Despair
Bob considers fulfilling the executive's request for assisted suicide but cannot let her go. Her slight movement creates hope, and their relationship becomes romantic.
Key Events
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The Subway Proposal — She asks Bob to let her roll toward an oncoming train. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Subway platform
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The Coleman Note — Bob writes, 'Should I finish what Coleman started?' and accidentally sends it for copying. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
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One Last Night Out — Bob takes the wounded executive out for one final night before the planned act. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: City nightlife district
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Bob Cannot Let Go — Bob cannot release the wheelchair because he has fallen in love. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Subway platform
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A Finger Moves — The executive wiggles a little finger, creating hope that she may recover. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Hospital
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Romantic Hope — Bob and the executive become romantically involved as her possible recovery offers hope. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Hospital
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Shelby's Former Romance — Bob learns that Shelby and the executive were once lovers. Characters: Bob Maconel, Gene Shelby
Location: Corporate office
Jealousy and Exposure
Bob becomes insecure about Gene Shelby's former relationship with the executive. Maurice Gregory exposes the surveillance behind Bob's promotion, causing Bob to lose control.
Key Events
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Shelby's Former Romance — Bob learns that Shelby and the executive were once lovers. Characters: Bob Maconel, Gene Shelby
Location: Corporate office
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Psychiatrist Exposes Surveillance — Maurice reveals that he knows about Bob's note and that management is monitoring him. Characters: Bob Maconel, Goldie / Maurice Gregory
Location: Company office
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Bob Explodes — Bob reacts violently, fights two coworkers, and storms out of the office. Characters: Bob Maconel, Goldie / Maurice Gregory
Location: Company office
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Shelby Visits with Gifts — Bob finds Shelby visiting with gifts, which intensifies his jealousy and suspicion. Characters: Bob Maconel, Gene Shelby
Location: Bob's home
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Photographs Reveal the Past — Bob opens Shelby's gift and finds photographs of Shelby with the executive. Characters: Bob Maconel, Gene Shelby
Location: Bob's home
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Bob Returns Armed — After a mental breakdown, Bob returns to the office carrying his gun. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
The Quiet Man's Truth
Photographs push Bob into a breakdown and send him back to the office with a gun. The apparent events are revealed as hallucinations before the story ends with Bob's suicide and the public's shallow description of him.
Key Events
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Bob Returns Armed — After a mental breakdown, Bob returns to the office carrying his gun. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
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Coleman Never Existed — The story reveals that events since before the shooting were hallucinations and Coleman was imaginary. Characters: Bob Maconel, Ralf Coleman
Location: Office
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Bob Shoots Himself — In the revealed reality, Bob shoots himself in front of the wounded executive. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Office
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The Final Note — Police find a note asking why Bob acted and claiming he had no other way to gain attention. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Bob's home
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He Was Quiet — News reporters interview neighbors, who describe Bob as a quiet man. Characters: Bob Maconel
Location: Neighborhood
An unhinged office worker who planned to go on a shooting spree at his workplace struggles with his newfound status as a hero after he ends up stopping a shooting spree instead.