Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Jojo's Unanswered Treatment
A woman recounts trying multiple remedies for Jojo's severe mange and repeatedly placing him in the sun. Jojo grows weaker, and the account returns to her worry without offering a resolution.
Key Events
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Jojo's Mange — A woman describes her desperate efforts to cure her longtime companion, Jojo, of severe mange.
Location: Unspecified
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Repeated Home Treatments — The woman tries several treatments in an effort to relieve Jojo's mange.
Location: Unspecified
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Jojo in the Sun — She repeatedly ties Jojo to a sugar-cane stalk so he can dry in the sun.
Location: Unspecified
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Jojo Grows Weaker — Despite her efforts, Jojo grows weaker and the woman says she has done everything she can.
Location: Unspecified
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Another Suggested Remedy — In a later conversation about Jojo, someone suggests motor oil as another possible remedy.
Location: Unspecified
Faith and Private Conduct
Reverend Tillman speaks to his congregation about loving relationships and his concerns for young people losing faith. A tense encounter with Helen reveals that he has been drinking before attempting to drive.
Key Events
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Sermon on Loving Bonds — Reverend Tillman urges the congregation to build loving relationships. Characters: Reverend Tillman
Location: Church
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Fear for Young People — He speaks about young people and his fear that they are turning away from faith. Characters: Reverend Tillman
Location: Church
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Drinking Before the Drive — Helen encounters Reverend Tillman preparing to drive to the grocery store despite having been drinking. Characters: Reverend Tillman, Helen Wayne
Location: Unspecified
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Helen Ordered Aside — Reverend Tillman insists he can manage and demands that Helen move out of his way. Characters: Reverend Tillman, Helen Wayne
Location: Unspecified
Pressure Around Jeremiah
Daniel's mother asks about Jeremiah and tells Daniel to prepare the boy's things. The excerpt then moves to Daniel's household conflict over Tillman, money, and a possible church position.
Key Events
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Jeremiah's Things — Daniel's mother asks about Jeremiah and tells Daniel to prepare the boy's things. Characters: Daniel Wayne, Jeremiah Wayne
Location: Unspecified
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Household Argument — Daniel and his wife argue about Reverend Tillman, money, and her possible church deacon position. Characters: Daniel Wayne
Location: Home
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Violence at Home — The argument escalates; a bottle crashes and Daniel's wife screams. Characters: Daniel Wayne
Location: Home
Hardship and Warning
A woman describes helping Daniel as he looks for work and reflects on the feeling of being trapped by hardship. Tillman's sermon warns that familiar people can become sources of temptation, but the excerpts end before showing any outcome.
Key Events
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Help During Hardship — A woman says that she and Marsha have been helping Daniel while he looks for work. Characters: Daniel Wayne
Location: Unspecified
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Feeling Trapped — The woman reflects on how hardship can leave a person feeling trapped.
Location: Unspecified
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Warning Against Temptation — Reverend Tillman warns that evil can use family, friends, and neighbors to draw people away from God. Characters: Reverend Tillman
Location: Church
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Sermon Excerpt Ends — The excerpts end during Tillman's sermon, without showing whether his warnings change anyone's choices. Characters: Reverend Tillman
Location: Church