Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Chosen from the Neighborhood
A film crew auditions young people from the Picasso neighborhood. Jessy is wary after his release but is intrigued by the crew's interest, while the young actors are asked to improvise naturally.
Key Events
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Neighborhood Auditions — A film crew auditions young people from the neighborhood for a film. Characters: Jessy, Ryan, Lilly
Location: Picasso neighborhood
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Jessy's Recent Release — Jessy has recently been released after serving three months. Characters: Jessy
Location: Not specified
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Wary Interest — Jessy is wary but intrigued that the crew noticed him and wants him in a movie. Characters: Jessy
Location: Audition setting
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Natural Performance Request — The director asks the young actors to speak naturally and improvise. Characters: Ryan, Jessy, Lilly
Location: Audition setting
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Story of Siblings — The film's story centers on a brother and sister living with their grandmother. Characters: Ryan, Lilly
Location: Rehearsal setting
Building the Sibling Story
The film within the story follows a pregnant teenage sister and a younger brother afraid she will abandon him. Rehearsals ask Ryan to develop this character alongside Jessy and Lilly, exposing their awkwardness and vulnerability.
Key Events
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Story of Siblings — The film's story centers on a brother and sister living with their grandmother. Characters: Ryan, Lilly
Location: Rehearsal setting
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Pregnancy in the Script — The sister in the film's story becomes pregnant at fifteen. Characters: Lilly
Location: Rehearsal setting
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Brother Fears Abandonment — The younger brother in the film's story fears his sister will abandon him. Characters: Ryan, Lilly
Location: Rehearsal setting
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Character-Building Exercises — Ryan develops his character through exercises and scenes with Jessy and Lilly. Characters: Ryan, Jessy, Lilly
Location: Rehearsal setting
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Awkward Rehearsals — Rehearsals reveal the young performers' awkwardness and vulnerability. Characters: Ryan, Jessy, Lilly
Location: Rehearsal setting
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Jessy's First Love — Jessy speaks about a painful first love and the judgment he has faced. Characters: Jessy
Location: Not specified
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Ryan Struggles with Acting — Ryan struggles with acting exercises and needs encouragement. Characters: Ryan
Location: Rehearsal setting
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Talent and Separation Warning — The director praises Ryan's talent and warns that the shoot's end may leave the cast bereft. Characters: Ryan
Location: Filming setting
Pain Surfaces on Set
Jessy speaks about a painful first love and the judgment he has faced, while Ryan struggles with acting exercises. A tense moment involving Jessy and Lilly leads to an apology, and Ryan clarifies that he was not there.
Key Events
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Talent and Separation Warning — The director praises Ryan's talent and warns that the shoot's end may leave the cast bereft. Characters: Ryan
Location: Filming setting
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Tense Moment on Set — A tense moment involving Jessy and Lilly prompts an apology. Characters: Jessy, Lilly
Location: Film set
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Ryan's Account of Absence — Ryan says he was not present for the incident involving Jessy and Lilly. Characters: Ryan
Location: Not specified
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Kenzo's Death — Ryan describes Kenzo's death as leaving him angry and overwhelmed. Characters: Ryan
Location: Not specified
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Dangerous Impulses — Ryan says he fought, felt drawn toward dangerous behavior, and once wished he had died instead. Characters: Ryan
Location: Not specified
Ryan's Unsettled Past
Ryan recounts the anger and despair that followed Kenzo's death, including fighting and dangerous impulses. He also describes childhood instability, his distant relationship with his mother, and his father's departure when he was a baby; his own future remains unresolved.
Key Events
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Dangerous Impulses — Ryan says he fought, felt drawn toward dangerous behavior, and once wished he had died instead. Characters: Ryan
Location: Not specified
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Childhood Instability — Conversations with adults reveal instability in Ryan's childhood. Characters: Ryan, Ryan
Location: Not specified
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Life with His Sister — Ryan lives with his sister, who says he is calmer and doing better with boundaries. Characters: Ryan
Location: Ryan's sister's home
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Mother Wants His Return — Ryan says his mother wants him to return, though he barely knows her. Characters: Ryan, Ryan
Location: Not specified
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Absent Father Recalled — Ryan says his father left when he was a baby. Characters: Ryan
Location: Not specified
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Fictional Brother Runs Away — The fictional brother runs away from his sister's home. Characters: Ryan, Lilly
Location: The sister's home in the film's story
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Ryan's Future Unresolved — The excerpt ends with Ryan explaining how his mother's difficulties and his needs shaped his childhood. Characters: Ryan, Ryan
Location: Not specified