Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Number In The Waiting Room
Peter struggles with grief, nightmares, and his wife's depression. Elizabeth's silent visits and the number 12787 begin an unsettling investigation.
Key Events
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Peter's Nightmares — Peter suffers nightmares and visions after his daughter's death, while his wife remains severely depressed. Characters: Peter Bower
Location: Peter's home
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Elizabeth Appears — Elizabeth silently gives Peter a card and writes 12787 before fleeing from the passing train. Characters: Peter Bower, Elizabeth Valentine
Location: Peter's waiting room
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The Recorded Choking — Elizabeth chokes when a train passes, but disappears before Peter can question her. Characters: Peter Bower, Elizabeth Valentine
Location: Peter's office
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The Date Is Found — Peter discovers that Elizabeth died on 12-7-87 and links his patients to the same date. Characters: Peter Bower, Elizabeth Valentine
Location: Peter's office
Ghosts Along The Rail Line
Peter discovers that his patients died around the same date as Elizabeth. Visions and the discovery of a ghostly mentor direct him toward False Creek.
Key Events
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Patients On The Train — Peter sees visions of his deceased patients on a train outside his office. Characters: Peter Bower, Felix, Patient
Location: Peter's office window
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A Ghostly Mentor — Peter discovers that the mentor he consulted has no reflection and is a ghost. Characters: Peter Bower
Location: Peter's office
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The Train-Line Map — Peter maps the deceased patients' homes and finds they lie along a rail line leading to False Creek. Characters: Peter Bower
Location: Peter's office
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Return To False Creek — Peter travels alone to his hometown to investigate the connection between the patients and the rail line. Characters: Peter Bower
Location: False Creek
The Buried Derailment
Barry reveals the secret behind the teenage accident, but refuses to join Peter's confession. The ghosts and new evidence show that the bicycle explanation is incomplete.
Key Events
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Barry Rejects Confession — Barry recalls their shared secret but demands that Peter leave him out of any confession. Characters: Peter Bower, Barry
Location: Local bar
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The Derailment Secret — Peter remembers that he and Barry left bicycles near the tracks, causing a derailment that killed 47 passengers. Characters: Peter Bower, Barry, Felix, Patient
Location: Railway tracks
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The Ghosts Attack — Peter is terrorized by the ghosts of Elizabeth, Felix, and his deceased daughter. Characters: Peter Bower, Elizabeth Valentine, Felix
Location: False Creek
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Peter Confesses — Peter confesses to Barbara, who explains that the statute of limitations has expired. Characters: Peter Bower, Barbara Henning
Location: Police station
The Murder Behind The Crash
Barry's death and Barbara's investigation expose contradictions in the official story. Peter finally remembers witnessing Elizabeth's murder and the switch being pulled.
Key Events
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The Accident Was Impossible — A ghostly message tells Peter that bicycles could not have derailed the train and urges him to remember more. Characters: Peter Bower
Location: Peter's home
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Barry Found Dead — Peter investigates the switch tower and finds Barry hanging inside. Characters: Peter Bower, Barry
Location: Switch tower
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The Rusty Insignia — Barbara identifies a rusty pin as Elizabeth's high-school insignia. Characters: Barbara Henning
Location: Switch house
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Blocked Road Evidence — Barbara discovers that the road used in the official account was blocked by the derailment. Characters: Barbara Henning
Location: False Creek
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Peter Recalls The Murder — Peter remembers seeing Elizabeth strangled and pulling the lever during her struggle. Characters: Peter Bower, Elizabeth Valentine
Location: Switch tower
Judgment On The Tracks
Barbara is abducted and Peter is restrained, but Elizabeth's ghost disrupts the escape. The approaching train kills the murderer and releases the dead.
Key Events
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Barbara Is Abducted — Barbara is knocked unconscious and placed in her police car's trunk after confronting the hidden truth. Characters: Peter Bower, Barbara Henning
Location: Police car
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Train-Track Showdown — Elizabeth's ghost causes the car to stall on the tracks, while Peter helps Barbara escape before the train arrives. Characters: Peter Bower, Barbara Henning, Elizabeth Valentine
Location: Railway tracks
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The Dead Move On — Peter sees the victims depart, and a peaceful vision of Elizabeth is followed by emotional closure at the beach. Characters: Peter Bower, Barbara Henning, Elizabeth Valentine
Location: Beach