Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Body in the Gulch
A violent ride is followed by the discovery of a body by Danny and his grandfather. De Carlo begins investigating and connects the killing to a wider series targeting young women.
Key Events
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Stranded Traveler Seeks a Ride — A stranded traveler argues with Nelson, hides the dog, and tries to hitch a ride.
Location: Roadside
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Driver Offers Transportation — A driver agrees to give the traveler a ride.
Location: Roadside
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Ride Ends in Violence — The journey ends violently, and a body is later found in a gulch.
Location: Unspecified
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Body Found in Gulch — Danny and his grandfather find the victim while fishing. Characters: Danny, First Victim (as Eddie Benton)
Location: Gulch
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Investigation Links Similar Murders — De Carlo suspects the killing belongs to a series targeting young women. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo, First Victim (as Eddie Benton)
Location: Unspecified
A Widening Manhunt
Medical findings and reports of similar murders deepen the investigation. De Carlo orders patrols along Highway 101 while unresolved clues accumulate.
Key Events
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San Francisco Killings Reviewed — De Carlo learns that four similar killings occurred in San Francisco. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified
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Victim Examination — An examination indicates a broken neck and injuries inflicted before death. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo, First Victim (as Eddie Benton)
Location: Medical examination setting
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Highway Patrols Increased — De Carlo orders extra patrols and stops of hitchhikers as the killer moves between areas. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Highway 101
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Family Safety Dispute — De Carlo insists his daughter stay close, while his wife objects to living in fear. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: De Carlo family home
Pressure at Home
De Carlo's fear for his daughter's safety leads to disagreement with his wife. The investigation continues without a clear identification of the murderer.
Key Events
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Family Safety Dispute — De Carlo insists his daughter stay close, while his wife objects to living in fear. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: De Carlo family home
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Unresolved Clues Accumulate — Reports involving young women, a swimming pool, and a missing radio do not identify the killer. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified
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Van Lead Pursued — De Carlo pursues a lead involving a van with help from an associate. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified
A Suspect Without Proof
A van lead, hypnosis, and vehicle records narrow the search. De Carlo believes he has a suspect, but acknowledges that the evidence cannot yet support a case for the district attorney.
Key Events
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Hypnosis Used for Details — De Carlo uses hypnosis in an attempt to recover details connected to the lead. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified
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Vehicle Records Narrow Search — Registration information and a DMV search reduce the possible suspects to a shorter list. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Department of Motor Vehicles
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Evidence Deemed Insufficient — De Carlo believes he has found his suspect but says the evidence is insufficient for the district attorney. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified
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De Carlo Seeks More Time — De Carlo decides to pursue the suspect on his own and asks for a week. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified
An Open Investigation
De Carlo asks for time to pursue the lead himself. He also meets Carol at a bar, while the provided account leaves the killer's identity and fate unresolved.
Key Events
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De Carlo Seeks More Time — De Carlo decides to pursue the suspect on his own and asks for a week. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified
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Carol Performs at a Bar — Carol performs, rejects an unwanted advance, and De Carlo intervenes. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo, Dr. Carol Thompson
Location: Bar
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Investigation Remains Unresolved — De Carlo follows a lead; the killer's identity and fate remain unknown in the provided account. Characters: Sgt. Vince De Carlo
Location: Unspecified