Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Reef's Unusual Signs
Sabrina and Gwen arrive at the Great Barrier Reef, where Sabrina spots a fish believed extinct and meets Julian. She then encounters Barnaby and learns of his unusual condition.
Key Events
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Reef Arrival — Sabrina and Gwen travel to the Great Barrier Reef. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Gwen
Location: Great Barrier Reef
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Rare Fish Sighting — Sabrina spots a fish believed extinct for fifty years. Characters: Sabrina Spellman
Location: Great Barrier Reef
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Meeting Julian — They meet marine biologist Julian, who is researching the reef. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Gwen, Dr. Julian Martin
Location: Great Barrier Reef
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Barnaby Discovered — Sabrina encounters Barnaby, a merman with an afflicted shoulder. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Barnaby
Location: Great Barrier Reef
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A Strange Affliction — Barnaby's condition is linked to marine creatures growing human-like legs. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Barnaby
Location: Great Barrier Reef
Trust Beneath the Surface
Julian treats Barnaby, and Sabrina learns that the illness affects others in his underwater community. Fin distrusts Sabrina's magic, but Sabrina promises to help without sorcery, and Fin gradually becomes more trusting.
Key Events
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Julian Treats Barnaby — Julian treats Barnaby's shoulder condition. Characters: Dr. Julian Martin, Barnaby
Location: Unspecified treatment setting
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Illness Spreads — Sabrina learns that other members of Barnaby's community are affected. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Barnaby
Location: Underwater community
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Fin's Distrust — Fin fears Sabrina's magic could harm the community. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Fin
Location: Underwater community
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A Promise Without Magic — Sabrina promises to help the community without using sorcery. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Fin
Location: Underwater community
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Barnaby Improves — Barnaby improves, and Fin becomes more willing to trust Sabrina. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Barnaby, Fin
Location: Underwater community
Plans Around the Reef
Jerome and Hilary pursue plans around the resort and reef while Julian becomes determined to find the source of the sightings and illness. Barnaby improves and returns to the water, but is then captured and confined at the resort pool.
Key Events
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Resort Schemes — Jerome and Hilary pursue plans around the resort and reef. Characters: Jerome Hestor, Hilary Hexton, the Cat & Woman
Location: Resort and reef
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Julian Seeks Answers — Julian becomes determined to find the source of the unusual sightings and illness. Characters: Dr. Julian Martin
Location: Great Barrier Reef
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Barnaby Returns — Barnaby returns to the water after his condition improves. Characters: Barnaby
Location: Water
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Barnaby Captured — Barnaby is captured and confined in the resort swimming pool. Characters: Barnaby
Location: Resort swimming pool
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Salem Warns Sabrina — Salem tells Sabrina that Barnaby has been captured. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Salem Saberhagen
Location: Resort
The Crowded Rescue
Salem tells Sabrina that Barnaby has been captured, and Fin feels betrayed by the broken promise of safety. Julian arranges Barnaby's transport to Sydney, while Wally's report attracts a crowd that obstructs Sabrina and Gwen's rescue attempt; the available plot ends before the rescue is resolved.
Key Events
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Fin Feels Betrayed — Fin feels betrayed after Sabrina's promise of safety is broken. Characters: Fin, Sabrina Spellman, Barnaby
Location: Underwater community
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Transport to Sydney — Julian arranges to transport Barnaby to Sydney. Characters: Dr. Julian Martin, Barnaby
Location: Resort
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Merman Reported — Wally reports that a merman may have been captured. Characters: Wally Gilliams, TV Newscaster, Barnaby
Location: Resort swimming pool
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Crowd Blocks Access — Press attention draws a crowd that obstructs access to Barnaby. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Gwen, Barnaby
Location: Resort swimming pool
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Rescue Attempt Stalls — Sabrina and Gwen seek a way through the crowd; the available plot leaves the rescue unresolved. Characters: Sabrina Spellman, Gwen, Barnaby, Dr. Julian Martin
Location: Resort swimming pool