Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Call Amid Family Tension
A child handles a gun while playing at being a police officer, prompting a warning. A call about a double homicide interrupts the family conversation, and the investigation begins against a backdrop of strained personal lives.
Key Events
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Child Handles Work Gun — A child plays at being a police officer and handles his father's work gun.
Location: Family home
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Warning Interrupts Play — An adult warns the child that handling the gun could get him into trouble.
Location: Family home
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Homicide Call Arrives — The family conversation is interrupted when Kevin McCleary receives a call about a double homicide. Characters: Kevin McCleary
Location: Unspecified
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Couple Found Dead — Investigators identify the two victims as a married couple. Characters: Kevin McCleary
Location: Homicide scene
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Investigators Question Motive — Investigators ask about the couple's relationship and possible financial problems. Characters: Kevin McCleary, Lt. Carl Runyon
Location: Homicide investigation
Doubts at the Crime Scene
Investigators question whether the deaths were a murder-suicide and examine the couple's relationship and finances. The pawned weapon raises suspicion because of its unusual connection to the wealthy victim.
Key Events
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Case Meets Resistance — Kevin and colleagues dislike the case, while Runyon resists committing more officers to upcoming work. Characters: Kevin McCleary, Lt. Carl Runyon
Location: Police work setting
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Marriage Strain Surfaces — The plot establishes that Griff and Olivia are separated and that their personal lives are strained. Characters: Griff McCleary, Olivia McCleary
Location: Unspecified
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Suicide Theory Challenged — Investigators question whether the husband killed his wife and then himself. Characters: Kevin McCleary
Location: Homicide investigation
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Pawned Weapon Raises Doubt — A detective notes that a man from Boyle Heights pawned the murder weapon, an unusual detail. Characters: Kevin McCleary
Location: Homicide investigation
Evidence and a Separate Scheme
Photographs suggest an affair, while a large life-insurance policy gives investigators another reason to question the apparent murder-suicide. Elsewhere, a man negotiates a separate murder-for-hire plan; the available account does not establish its connection to the homicide case.
Key Events
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Affair Evidence Found — Private photographs suggest the husband had a secret affair. Characters: Kevin McCleary
Location: Homicide investigation
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Insurance Policy Discovered — Investigators find that the husband took out a large life-insurance policy on his wife. Characters: Kevin McCleary
Location: Homicide investigation
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Murder-for-Hire Negotiation — A man negotiates with an ex-Marine to have his wife killed and the death staged as a robbery.
Location: Unspecified
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Payment and Access Demands — The client is told to provide a photograph, house key, security code, and $250,000.
Location: Unspecified
Griff's Personal Fracture
Griff intervenes when Brett harasses Nikki, and their conversation touches on difficult relationships and loss. Griff later confronts Olivia and then confides in Cassie, while the supplied account leaves the case and marriage unresolved.
Key Events
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Griff Intervenes for Nikki — Griff intervenes when Brett harasses Nikki, then talks with her about difficult relationships and loss. Characters: Griff McCleary, Nikki Mayhew, Brett
Location: Unspecified
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Griff Confronts Olivia — Griff confronts Olivia while she is with another man; she tells him to leave, and he departs angrily. Characters: Griff McCleary, Olivia McCleary
Location: Evening gathering
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Griff Confides in Cassie — Griff admits to Cassie that he is hurting and unsure who he has become. Characters: Griff McCleary, Cassie Ives
Location: Private setting