Plot Analysis Summary
A widowed newspaper editor's suspicion of a new colleague develops into an unresolved mix of provocation, attraction, and distrust.
Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
An Uneasy Arrival
The Narrator works at a small-town newspaper after his wife's death. The Kid joins the staff, prompting the Narrator to suspect that the newcomer has a personal reason for being near him.
Key Events
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The Narrator Works at the Newspaper — The widowed Narrator works as an assistant editor among older colleagues who bicker over punctuation. Characters: The Narrator, The Editor, The Assistant Editor
Location: Small-town newspaper office
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The Kid Joins the Staff — The Kid arrives at the paper, and The Narrator suspects he wants to get close to him. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: Small-town newspaper office
The House and the Accusations
A startling attic mishap intensifies the Narrator's distrust of The Kid. Their subsequent conversations turn to conscience, the Narrator's late wife, and The Kid's marriage and honesty.
Key Events
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The Attic Mishap — While The Kid is in the attic using cocaine, the dog falls through the ceiling onto the kitchen table. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: The Narrator's house
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Distrust Deepens — The dog is unharmed, but The Kid offers little apology, deepening The Narrator's distrust. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: The Narrator's house
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Accusations and Provocations — They trade accusations and jokes as The Kid questions The Narrator about his late wife. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: Not specified
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Questions of Conscience — The Kid presses The Narrator to consider whether his behavior shows a lack of conscience. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: Not specified
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The Narrator Challenges The Kid — The Narrator confronts The Kid about his marriage, dishonesty, and apparent pursuit of him. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: Not specified
Testing Motives
The Narrator considers whether The Kid is a sociopath and tries to test his theory through a tense encounter. He also discusses remarriage and reveals that his screenplay is based on The Kid.
Key Events
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Testing a Theory at the Bar — The Narrator discusses sociopathy and treats a tense tailgating encounter as a test of his theory. Characters: The Narrator
Location: Bar
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Advice About Remarrying — A woman urges The Narrator to marry again and discusses her unhappy marriages. Characters: The Narrator
Location: Not specified
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The Screenplay Subject Revealed — The Narrator admits that his screenplay, based on someone at the newspaper, is about The Kid. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: Not specified
An Unsettled Challenge
The Kid visits the Narrator's house, criticizes it, and reads the screenplay. Their disagreement over how the script portrays The Kid leads to a pencil challenge that remains unresolved in the excerpt.
Key Events
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The Kid Visits the House — The Kid criticizes the house's monotony and mess, saying he has seen inside after the back door was left open. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: The Narrator's house
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The Script on the Desk — The Kid praises a scene in the script, but The Narrator says he has made The Kid more interesting than he is. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: The Narrator's house
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The Pencil Challenge — Their argument becomes a challenge about knocking over pencils, but the excerpt ends before it is resolved. Characters: The Narrator, The Kid
Location: The Narrator's house