Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Frustrated Police Experiment
Police detectives struggle to secure convictions. Geiberger recruits Louise and authorizes a covert pawn shop sting using videotape.
Key Events
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Detectives Lose Faith — Police detectives become frustrated because arrested criminals are not being convicted.
Location: Miami Police Department
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Louise Joins the Team — Geiberger recruits Louise Webster to support the frustrated detectives. Characters: Captain John Geiberger, Louise Webster, Ramon
Location: Police headquarters
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Hymie Is Arrested — A detective observes Hymie buying stolen goods and arrests him.
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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The Sting Is Proposed — The team proposes recording illegal transactions inside a pawn shop. Characters: Captain John Geiberger, Ramon
Location: Police headquarters
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Chief Approves Operation — Geiberger obtains approval but promises official deniability if the operation leaks. Characters: Captain John Geiberger
Location: Police headquarters
The Pawn Shop Trap
The operation begins recording illegal transactions and attracts increasingly unusual customers. Robbery and outside scrutiny reveal the risks of maintaining the storefront.
Key Events
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Camera Test Inside Shop — The team tests the camera's sound quality and positioning inside the pawn shop. Characters: Louise Webster, Ramon
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Sting Gains Momentum — The undercover pawn shop operation appears successful for a period of time. Characters: Louise Webster, Ramon, Captain John Geiberger
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Shop Earnings Are Robbed — Three criminals rob the pawn shop of its accumulated earnings.
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Jaws Guards the Shop — The operators purchase a guard dog named Jaws for protection.
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Lieutenant Demands Silence — A police lieutenant receives a tip and is paid to keep quiet about the fencing operation.
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
Carmine Draws the Line
Carmine threatens the investigators after they intrude on his territory. Despite the danger, the sting expands from minor fencing to a major weapons investigation.
Key Events
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The Dog Seller Arrives — A boy seeks money for a dog, and the operators give him one hundred dollars.
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Carmine Issues Threat — Carmine threatens the operation for intruding into his criminal territory. Characters: Carmine
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Strange Customers Enter — The sting records transactions involving a revolver, a toaster, and marijuana.
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Gunrunners Offer Weapons — Two gunrunners offer a truckload of M76 submachine guns to the shop. Characters: Louise Webster, Ramon
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Weapons Site Is Exposed — Louise and Ramon videotape while undercover detectives inspect the hidden weapons. Characters: Louise Webster, Ramon
Location: Waterfront condominium construction site
Weapons and Sabotage
The team exposes a cache of M76 submachine guns and arrests the gunrunners after a shootout. Carmine retaliates with warnings and a bomb hidden in a cigar box.
Key Events
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Gunrunner Shootout — The detectives reveal themselves, a shootout follows, and the gunrunners are arrested. Characters: Louise Webster, Ramon
Location: Waterfront condominium construction site
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Dead Fish Warning — Carmine sends a dead fish wrapped in newspapers as another threat. Characters: Carmine
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
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Bomb Destroys Car — Louise discovers Carmine's bomb; it is thrown outside but destroys a car. Characters: Louise Webster, Carmine
Location: Hymie's pawn shop
The Arrest Party
The investigators invite suspects to a party intended to produce mass arrests. Carmine's assault is turned against him when the suspects resist and police reinforcements arrive.
Key Events
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Party Becomes a Trap — The suspects gather for a planned mass arrest, but Carmine arrives and attacks the operators. Characters: Captain John Geiberger, Louise Webster, Ramon, Carmine
Location: Pawn shop party
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Mass Arrest and Promotion — Police arrest 250 people; 231 are convicted, and the operation's leadership receives new assignments. Characters: Captain John Geiberger, Louise Webster, Ramon, Carmine
Location: Pawn shop and police headquarters