Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Mine That Changed Everything
An inspection of the Boonsey minesweeping detachment begins with skepticism about local warnings. The discovery and explosion of a real mine strengthen the case for closing the base.
Key Events
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Base Closure Inspection — An inspection begins with plans to close the allegedly redundant minesweeping detachment.
Location: Boonsey naval base
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Warnings About Sea Mines — The local crew claims that many mines have been found in the surrounding sea.
Location: Boonsey naval base
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Minesweeper Departure — The inspection party goes to sea aboard the minesweeper HMS Compton.
Location: Boonsey harbor
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Search For Bessy — The crew searches for a mine-shaped object used to collect lifeboat funds.
Location: Sea near Boonsey
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A Real Mine Appears — The crew discovers a real mine instead of the expected fundraising object.
Location: Sea near Boonsey
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Pouter Strikes The Mine — A crew member repeatedly hits the mine while trying to take it apart.
Location: Sea near Boonsey
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Mine Explosion — The released mine explodes nearby and reinforces doubts about the detachment.
Location: Sea near Boonsey
Paperwork And Fever
The island personnel delay closure with a nonexistent technical device and an expanding paperwork trail. A false yellow-fever outbreak is then used to obstruct the inspection.
Key Events
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Closure Decision — The inspection concludes that a more competent crew should replace the local detachment.
Location: Boonsey naval base
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Fulminator Delay — A supposedly technical device is used as a false reason to delay decommissioning.
Location: Boonsey naval offices
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Paperwork Mountain — A thin folder circulates through military offices and returns as a mountain of paperwork.
Location: Military offices
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The Delay Is Exposed — The inspection authority recognizes that the technical story is a delaying trick.
Location: Boonsey naval offices
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Yellow Fever Hoax — A supposed outbreak of yellow fever is reported on the island to discourage inspection.
Location: Boonsey island
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Island Life Resumes — The illness story is revealed as a trick when ordinary life returns to the island.
Location: Boonsey island
The Revolutionary Siege
Revolutionary talk at the local bar becomes the basis for a fabricated siege. The false emergency attracts official attention and places the inspection authority's career in danger.
Key Events
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Revolutionary Talk — The bar owner drunkenly speaks about revolution and removing the British from the island.
Location: Local bar
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Siege Story Invented — The local personnel use revolutionary talk to fabricate a siege by hostile forces.
Location: Boonsey island
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Three-Day Evacuation Order — The inspection authority officially gives the island personnel three days to leave.
Location: Boonsey island
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Reporter Takes Photographs — A reporter sent to photograph the alleged crisis records the unfolding events.
Location: Boonsey island
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Governments Demand Answers — British and French authorities question the incident, placing a career at risk.
Location: Military offices
Photographs And Consequences
A staged attack is exposed as a hoax, but a compromising photograph threatens to make the deception an international scandal. The official report is destroyed to contain the damage.
Key Events
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Fake Attack Launched — A staged attack on the bar owner and his men is launched to support the siege story.
Location: Boonsey island
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The Siege Is A Hoax — The inspection authority discovers that the attack and the siege were fabricated.
Location: Boonsey island
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Courts-Martial Threatened — The inspection authority prepares to punish everyone involved in the deception.
Location: Boonsey island
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Compromising Photograph — A photograph appears to show the inspection authority leading the supposed all-out attack.
Location: Boonsey island
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Report Torn Up — To prevent worldwide embarrassment, the inspection authority tears up the report.
Location: Boonsey island
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Return Toward Portsmouth — The inspection party leaves the island and travels back toward Portsmouth.
Location: Sea near Boonsey
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Second Mine Explosion — The returning boat strikes another real mine, leaving the passengers swimming toward base.
Location: Sea near Portsmouth
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Swimming Back To Base — The inspection party is left to swim back to the naval base.
Location: Sea near Portsmouth