Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Descent into Tyranny
Red Eye murders the Marshal and uses a shorting substance to disable defenses. He systematically bullies the townspeople into submission, establishing a climate of fear.
Key Events
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Frontier Planet Setting — Introduction to the futuristic western setting light years from Earth. Location: Oblivion Town
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Marshal Stone Murdered — Red Eye kills the Marshal using a special substance that disables electronics. Location: Town Street
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Cyborg Deputy Disabled — Stell is taken down during the street showdown. Location: Town Street
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Townspeople Intimidated — Red Eye bullies residents into allowing him to take over. Location: Oblivion Town
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Gaunt Foresees Death — The mortician uses his supernatural ability to predict tragedy. Characters: Gaunt
Location: Wilderness
Gathering Allies
Gaunt foresees the coming tragedy and teams up with Buteo after a wilderness rescue. The pair travels to Oblivion for the funeral, navigating early tensions.
Key Events
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Gaunt Foresees Death — The mortician uses his supernatural ability to predict tragedy. Characters: Gaunt
Location: Wilderness
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Buteo Saved from Scorpion — Zack rescues the native from a giant scorpion attack. Characters: Buteo
Location: Wilderness
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Alliance Formed — Gaunt arrives with news and teams up with Buteo. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Wilderness
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Journey to Oblivion — The group travels together for the funeral. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Road to Oblivion
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Saloon Confrontation — Zack avoids violence despite provocation by a henchman. Characters: Buteo
Location: Local Saloon
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Funeral Ceremony — The group attends Marshal Stone's funeral. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Oblivion Cemetery
Revenge and Retaliation
Buteo discovers the truth behind his family's death and challenges the killer to a fair fight. His victory triggers a brutal retaliation from Red Eye's gang.
Key Events
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Funeral Ceremony — The group attends Marshal Stone's funeral. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Oblivion Cemetery
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Visit to Doc Valentine — Zack consults the inventor about failed protection tech. Characters: Doc Valentine
Location: Doc's Workshop
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Empath Revelation — Mattie discovers Zack feels everyone's pain, detesting violence. Location: Town Whorehouse
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Buteo's Revenge Motive — Buteo learns Red Eye's associate killed his family. Characters: Buteo
Location: Oblivion Town
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Fair Fight Challenge — Buteo challenges the associate to a duel. Characters: Buteo
Location: Town Square
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Associate Defeated — Buteo wins the fight and kills his opponent. Characters: Buteo
Location: Town Square
Final Stand in the Badlands
Zack overcomes his pacifist nature to rescue Buteo and confronts the townspeople siding with the tyrant. A final rush to the Badlands ends the conflict.
Key Events
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Associate Defeated — Buteo wins the fight and kills his opponent. Characters: Buteo
Location: Town Square
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Buteo Captured — Red Eye retaliates by capturing and whipping Buteo. Characters: Buteo
Location: Town Stocks
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Zack Overcomes Fear — Zack senses trouble and decides to act despite his pacifism. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Town Streets
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Buteo Rescued — Zack saves Buteo and shoots townspeople siding with Red Eye. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Town Stocks
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Victory Celebration — Zack believes he has won the battle against tyranny. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Town Square
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Mattie Abducted — Red Eye takes Mattie, shifting the stakes. Location: Badlands
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Rush to Badlands — Friends mobilize to rescue Mattie. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Badlands
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Villains Defeated — The group defeats all villains for good. Characters: Gaunt, Buteo
Location: Badlands
On another planet which resembles the Old West, a die-hard pacifist is forced to re-examine his ways after an evil alien bandit and his gang murder his estranged sheriff father, take over his home town, and threaten his friends.