Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Fear Enters the City
Ordinary evening encounters are set against a series of shootings of women. Public fear grows, and residents criticize the police response.
Key Events
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Ordinary Evening Conversations — Everyday conversations and encounters establish a calm urban evening.
Location: City
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A Woman Moves On — A woman talks about moving on from a failed relationship.
Location: City
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Shootings Spread Fear — A series of shootings of women spreads fear through the city.
Location: City
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Residents Criticize Police — Residents criticize the police as newspapers condemn their efforts.
Location: City
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Public Life Narrows — People lock their doors and avoid public places as fear grows.
Location: City
The Search Widens
Police patrol streets, search buildings, and question possible suspects. Eddie's bandaged hand and implausible account draw attention, while Peter denies involvement.
Key Events
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Police Patrol the Streets — Police increase patrols and search buildings overlooking the streets.
Location: City streets
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Eddie's Bandaged Hand — Eddie is introduced with his right hand bandaged. Characters: Eddie Miller
Location: Unspecified
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Eddie's Hawaii Story Falters — Eddie claims to have built a bridge in Hawaii, but cannot provide convincing details. Characters: Eddie Miller
Location: Unspecified
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Peter Is Questioned — Police scrutinize Peter's troubling letters; he denies shooting anyone. Characters: Peter Eureka
Location: Unspecified
Threats and Uncertainty
A young man found with a gun makes ominous remarks, but says he has hurt no one. Officers arrange a hospital examination while the search for the sniper continues.
Key Events
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A Gunman Is Found on a Roof — Officers find a young man with a gun who says he has hurt no one. Characters: Young Man with Gun
Location: Rooftop
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The Young Man Speaks Ominously — He says he dislikes people and has access to more weapons. Characters: Young Man with Gun
Location: Rooftop
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Hospital Examination Planned — Officers decide to have the young man examined at a hospital. Characters: Young Man with Gun
Location: Rooftop
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Eddie Told to Replace Bandage — Eddie's superior tells him to replace his dirty hand bandage before returning to work. Characters: Eddie Miller
Location: Workplace
Another Park Shooting
Eddie is told to replace his dirty bandage before returning to work. After another woman is killed in a park, her companion says she had no known quarrels, and an officer asks him to look for clues.
Key Events
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Woman Killed in a Park — Police arrive after a woman is killed while sitting with a companion.
Location: Park
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Witness Asked to Look for Clues — The companion reports no known quarrels, and an officer asks him to look for clues.
Location: Park