Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Blood for Profit
A heavily armed mercenary squad attacks militia positions and pursues fleeing targets. The squad celebrates the money attached to the operation, while one fighter begins to question the value of the lives being taken.
Key Events
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Mercenary Assault Begins — The mercenary squad begins a ruthless operation against militia fighters. Characters: Hammaford, Wilson, Notch
Location: Militia-held buildings
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Buildings Are Cleared — The squad clears buildings and kills armed targets. Characters: Hammaford, Wilson, Notch
Location: Occupied buildings
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Flight Toward Mosque — Fleeing targets are pursued toward a mosque. Characters: Hammaford, Wilson, Notch
Location: Road toward a mosque
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Payment for Targets — The squad celebrates the large sums placed on the targets' lives. Characters: Hammaford, Wilson, Notch
Location: Mercenary staging area
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Violence Is Questioned — The operation's human cost begins to trouble one mercenary.
Location: Aftermath of the operation
Shelter and Remorse
A gravely wounded mercenary is sheltered in a remote parish and slowly nursed back to health. The priest recognizes his hidden past and introduces a moral alternative based on forgiveness and compassion.
Key Events
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Wounded Man Found — A gravely wounded mercenary is found near death.
Location: Remote parish
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Last Rites Given — A priest shelters the wounded man and gives him the last rites.
Location: Remote parish
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Recovery in Hiding — The priest nurses the wounded man back to health.
Location: Remote parish
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A Past Is Hidden — The priest recognizes that the silent survivor is hiding from his past.
Location: Parish interior
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Lessons of Forgiveness — The priest teaches forgiveness, compassion, and love of enemies.
Location: Village parish
A Town Under Threat
The priest explains how armed men exploit families through kidnapping and the drug trade. As violence reaches the town, the recovering survivor apologizes, joins the community, and teaches villagers how to defend themselves.
Key Events
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The Hills Threaten Families — The priest explains that armed men kidnap people and force families into drug cooperation.
Location: Village
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Violence Reaches Town — The spreading violence directly reaches the community.
Location: Town outskirts
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An Apology After Anger — The recovering mercenary loses his temper, then apologizes to the community.
Location: Village
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Villagers Learn Defense — He teaches villagers how to defend themselves.
Location: Village training area
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Attacking Comes Naturally — He admits that he understands attacking better than defending.
Location: Village training area
The Past Returns
LeClerc investigates an ambush and realizes that the attackers possess professional training. He traces the survivor to the church and offers money and a return to the mercenary life, but the offer is rejected.
Key Events
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Attacking Comes Naturally — He admits that he understands attacking better than defending.
Location: Village training area
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Ambush Is Investigated — LeClerc investigates an ambush and studies the attackers' methods. Characters: LeClerc
Location: Ambush site
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The Attackers Were Trained — The investigation reveals that the opponents were not trained priests. Characters: LeClerc
Location: Ambush site
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LeClerc Offers Return — LeClerc offers money and a return to the mercenary team. Characters: LeClerc
Location: Church refuge
The Weapon Awakens
An assault on the sanctuary forces the survivor to accept his violent abilities. He prepares to fight, kills a group of attackers with firearms and blades, and is identified by LeClerc as a former mercenary turned enemy.
Key Events
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Sanctuary Is Attacked — Violence strikes the priests and their sanctuary.
Location: Church sanctuary
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A Weapon Forged by Suffering — The priest says suffering may have forged the survivor into a weapon.
Location: Church sanctuary
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The Fight Is Prepared — The former mercenary leaves to prepare for the fight.
Location: Village outskirts
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Attackers Found Dead — A group of men is found dead from gunfire and precise blade strikes.
Location: Remote settlement
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Professional Work Identified — LeClerc identifies the killings as the work of a highly skilled professional. Characters: LeClerc
Location: Remote settlement
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The Search Is Ordered — LeClerc orders the former mercenary to be found after recognizing him as an enemy. Characters: LeClerc
Location: Mercenary command post