Plot Analysis Summary
An Englishwoman's hope for a child becomes entangled with a shrine community's beliefs, conflict, and uncertain fate.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Wish at Gulab Shah
An Englishwoman arrives at the shrine hoping to have a baby. Visitors welcome her, offer blessings, and arrange for her to meet Sahab.
Key Events
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Pilgrim Arrives at the Shrine — An Englishwoman arrives on pilgrimage, hoping to have a baby.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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Visitors Offer Blessings — Shrine visitors welcome the pilgrim and believe her wish may be granted.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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Kamal Receives an Assignment — Kamal is told to look after the Englishwoman. Characters: Kamal
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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The Pilgrim Meets Sahab — The shrine's visitors arrange for the Englishwoman to meet Sahab, an Englishman. Characters: Sahab
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
Dignity and Uneasy Attention
Sahab asks to see and photograph the eunuchs, who insist that their dignity be respected. Their accounts of family treatment reveal their understanding of their place in the world, while jealousy complicates Sahab's involvement.
Key Events
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A Request to Photograph — Sahab asks to see and photograph the eunuchs. Characters: Sahab
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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Dignity Is Defended — The eunuchs insist that their dignity be respected.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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Stories of Family Rejection — The eunuchs recount how their families treated them and explain their place in the world.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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Jealousy Enters the Shrine — A shrine resident accuses Sahab of being drawn by the Englishwoman's 'white flesh' and speaks with jealousy and anger. Characters: Sahab
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
Ritual and Expectation
Sahab is prepared for a ritual involving a white mare. The people around him discuss the hoped-for child's religious and political future, but the account leaves the ritual's exact workings unexplained.
Key Events
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The White Mare Ritual — Sahab is prepared for a ritual involving a white mare. Characters: Sahab
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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The Child's Imagined Future — People discuss a hoped-for boy's reception in America and Muslim upbringing, while leaving another child's fate to God.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
A Birth and a Taking
A baby is born, and a eunuch's boy takes the child away, leaving the Englishwoman distressed. The shrine is then shut down by police, and its people face accusations of fraud.
Key Events
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A Baby Is Born — A baby is born after the ritual-related discussions of the Englishwoman's hoped-for pregnancy.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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The Child Is Taken Away — A eunuch's boy takes the baby away, distressing the Englishwoman.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
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Police Close the Shrine — Police shut down the shrine, and its people face accusations of fraud.
Location: Gulab Shah shrine
An Unresolved Plea
The Englishwoman is found to have left with her brother, while Sahab searches for her. A visitor begs her to help secure his release and return the boy, but the child's fate and Sahab's release remain unresolved.
Key Events
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The Englishwoman Has Left — Asked where the Englishwoman went, someone learns she left with her brother; Sahab searches for her.
Location: Unspecified
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A Plea for Release and Return — A visitor begs the Englishwoman to secure his release and return the boy; the child's fate and Sahab's release remain unresolved.
Location: Unspecified