Plot Analysis Summary
A grieving bank president confronts despair, rediscovers faith, and completes a divinely assigned mission with Herb's guidance.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Grief And Financial Pressure
A family struggles with multiple deaths, weakened faith, mortgage arrears, and a nonprofit school's financial crisis. The bank president also faces pressure from a bank examiner.
Key Events
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Family Grief — A married couple grieves with their daughter after the deaths of her husband and toddler daughter.
Location: A small New Mexico town
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Faith Begins To Fade — The grieving bank president becomes bitter and angry with God after losing his granddaughter.
Location: The family home
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Punching Bag Anger — The bank president takes his frustrations out on an office punching bag.
Location: The bank office
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Domestic Verbal Strain — He verbally lashes out at his wife, who wisely deflects the attacks.
Location: The family home
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Mortgage Arrears — The daughter is three months behind on her home mortgage.
Location: The bank
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School Financial Crisis — The nonprofit school struggles financially and is three hundred thousand dollars in arrears.
Location: Jardin Del Sol
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Bank Examiner Pressure — A bank examiner pressures the president to pursue foreclosure of the nonprofit school.
Location: The bank
An Unlikely Messenger
Herb appears on a makeshift golf course and claims that God has chosen the bank president for a special mission. Suspicion initially keeps the troubled man emotionally guarded.
Key Events
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Garden Preparations — The wife maintains her faith while preparing her flower garden for an upcoming judging event.
Location: The flower garden
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Herb Appears — Herb, a motorcycle-riding emissary of God, meets the bank president in the middle of nowhere. Characters: Herb
Location: A makeshift golf course
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Sand Wedge Introduced — Herb's messengering service includes a lovable dachshund named Sand Wedge. Characters: Herb
Location: A makeshift golf course
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Mission Revealed — Herb tells the bank president that God has chosen him for a special mission. Characters: Herb
Location: A makeshift golf course
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Initial Distrust — The bank president is initially suspicious and distrustful of Herb's message. Characters: Herb
Location: A makeshift golf course
The Cliffside Choice
The bank president contemplates suicide during a rainy night at a cliff. Herb's intense conversation becomes a crucial moment that begins to change their relationship.
Key Events
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Rainy Cliff Crisis — During a rainy night, the bank president contemplates suicide at the edge of a cliff. Characters: Herb
Location: The edge of a cliff
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Heart To Heart — Herb engages him in an intense conversation and offers to let him end his life. Characters: Herb
Location: The edge of a cliff
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A Mellowing Spirit — After the conversation, the bank president begins to mellow and his relationship with Herb deepens. Characters: Herb
Location: The edge of a cliff
Guidance Through Doubt
Herb becomes a confidante, coach, spiritual guide, and caddy. Humor, wisdom, common sense, and Bible verses help restore the bank president's faith.
Key Events
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Wisdom And Scripture — Herb offers humor, common sense, wisdom, and Bible verses during their conversations. Characters: Herb
Location: The makeshift golf course
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Faith Starts Returning — The special mission strengthens the bank president's faith despite his continuing doubts. Characters: Herb
Location: The makeshift golf course
The Mission Completed
The bank president uses his talents, leaves his comfort zone, and persists despite doubt. The resulting benefits extend beyond anything he expected.
Key Events
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Talents Put To Work — His willingness to complete the mission helps him develop his existing God-given talents. Characters: Herb
Location: The small New Mexico town
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Beyond Comfort — The bank president steps outside his comfort zone and persists in completing the mission. Characters: Herb
Location: The small New Mexico town
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Unexpected Benefits — His stick-to-itiveness produces benefits reaching far beyond what he could have planned. Characters: Herb
Location: The small New Mexico town