Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Breakthrough and the Assault
Fret's research yields a potential way to fight the fungal disease. After sharing the discovery, she is assaulted and wakes in an unfamiliar container.
Key Events
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Fret's Fungal Research — Fret researches a deadly contagious fungal disease in Canada. Characters: Fret
Location: Vase laboratory
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A Potential Breakthrough — Fret discovers knowledge that may protect people or reverse the disease's effects. Characters: Fret
Location: Vase laboratory
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Fret Tells a Coworker — Fret shares her discovery with a coworker while examining the results. Characters: Fret
Location: Vase laboratory
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Fret Is Assaulted — Fret is knocked unconscious and her suit's face shield is broken. Characters: Fret
Location: Outside the laboratory
Voices Behind the Walls
Trapped among other occupants, Fret communicates through the container walls. Fragmented memories begin to reveal how she came to be preserved.
Key Events
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Awakening in the Container — Fret wakes on a ledge inside a container with tubes attached to her body. Characters: Fret
Location: Hexagonal container
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Searching for a Way Out — Fret struggles to free herself and pounds on the container walls. Characters: Fret
Location: Hexagonal container
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A Voice Through the Walls — Fret communicates through the walls with a man she knows, later identified as John. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Adjacent containers
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Other Occupants Respond — Fret hears other noises and discovers additional people in similar containers. Characters: Fret
Location: Container room
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Memories Restore the Past — Fret's memories return in fragments as she interacts with the other occupants. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Container room and remembered settings
Betrayal and Revenge
Fret's memories show her work at Vase and her relationship with John. After his betrayal, she infects him, and John arranges for her assault and preservation.
Key Events
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Memories Restore the Past — Fret's memories return in fragments as she interacts with the other occupants. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Container room and remembered settings
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Fret Joins Vase — Fret is hired by Vase to research slime molds. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Vase
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John Betrays Fret — Fret's relationship with John deteriorates after he cheats on her. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Vase
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Fret Infects John — Fret takes samples from victims and infects John in revenge. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Vase
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Fret Is Sent to Preservation — John arranges for Fret to be assaulted and placed in cryogenic preservation. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Cryogenic preservation facility
The Chamber Awakens
Fret and other Vase members enter cryogenic preservation in hope that a cure will be found. Much later, gold-armored machines begin opening the tubes and moving their occupants.
Key Events
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Fret Is Sent to Preservation — John arranges for Fret to be assaulted and placed in cryogenic preservation. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Cryogenic preservation facility
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Vase Enters Cryogenic Sleep — John and other Vase members enter preservation, hoping a cure will be found. Characters: Fret, John
Location: Cryogenic chamber
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Gold-Armored Machines Open Tubes — Gold-armored machines open the tubes and move their occupants. Characters: Fret, Gold
Location: Cryogenic chamber
A Machine in Fret's Place
Fret attacks a gold-armored machine and the apparent escape leads to the revelation that she has become one. She saves John from destruction and brings him for a painful removal of fungal growths and transformation.
Key Events
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Fret Attacks a Machine — Fret knocks over her tube, forces its bottom off, and attacks a gold-armored machine. Characters: Fret, Gold
Location: Cryogenic chamber
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Fret's New Form Revealed — The apparent escape is revealed as Fret replacing the machine she attacked. Characters: Fret, Gold
Location: Cryogenic chamber
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John Is Spared — Fret, now a machine, rescues John from being destroyed because of his infection. Characters: Fret, John, Gold
Location: Cryogenic chamber
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John's Growths Are Removed — Fret brings John's fungal-covered body to a machine to remove the growths painfully. Characters: Fret, John, Gold
Location: Cryogenic chamber
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John Is Transformed — John is transformed into a robot-machine after the fungal growths are removed. Characters: Fret, John, Gold
Location: Cryogenic chamber