Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Car and Expectations
Ryder starts senior year hopeful and receives a 1967 Chevelle as a project car. His father's advice about swimming and scholarships becomes another source of pressure, and Ryder eventually leaves the sport.
Key Events
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Senior Year Begins — Ryder begins senior year feeling optimistic about what lies ahead. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: School
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Hopes for Independence — Ryder hopes a car will give him independence and help him impress girls. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Unspecified
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Chevelle Surprise — Ryder's parents surprise him with a project car. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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A Work in Progress — Ryder's father compares the unfinished car to Ryder's own development. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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Pressure to Swim — Ryder's father urges him to pursue swimming and scholarship opportunities. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Unspecified
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Leaving the Sport — Ryder eventually gives up swimming and struggles with expectations placed on him. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Unspecified
Confidences and Complications
Ryder confides in Greg, who encourages him to pursue his own future. Ryder's unreturned feelings and failure to recognize a longtime friend's care complicate his relationships.
Key Events
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Leaving the Sport — Ryder eventually gives up swimming and struggles with expectations placed on him. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Unspecified
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Confiding in Greg — Ryder tells Greg about the pressure of disappointing his father. Characters: Ryder Jensen, Greg Randle
Location: Unspecified
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Greg's Encouragement — Greg relates to Ryder's concerns and encourages him to shape his own future. Characters: Ryder Jensen, Greg Randle
Location: Unspecified
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Unreturned Feelings — Ryder has feelings for a girl who does not return them. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Unspecified
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A Friend Overlooked — A longtime friend cares for Ryder, but he is slow to recognize it. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Unspecified
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Tensions at Home — Ryder's difficulties at home add to his sense of pressure. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
Escaping the Pressure
A student tells Ryder to stay away, but he follows when she leaves school in tears after a fight with her parents. Greg's nights out and Ryder's car trouble add to the strain rather than resolving his problems.
Key Events
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Tensions at Home — Ryder's difficulties at home add to his sense of pressure. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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A Student's Anger — Another student is upset with Ryder and tells him to stay away. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: School
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Following Her Outside — After the student leaves school in tears following a fight with her parents, Ryder follows to check on her despite Greg's complaints. Characters: Ryder Jensen, Greg Randle
Location: School
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Nights of Escape — Greg draws Ryder into nights out, drinking, and partying as Ryder tries to escape his problems. Characters: Ryder Jensen, Greg Randle
Location: Unspecified
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Car Trouble — Trouble with Ryder's car adds to his frustration, and Greg says he can lift Ryder's spirits. Characters: Ryder Jensen, Greg Randle
Location: Unspecified
Confrontation and Repair
Ryder clashes with his father and admits his fears about college, his future, and never measuring up. His father apologizes and reassures him, and Ryder accepts the apology.
Key Events
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Clash with His Father — Ryder's frustration boils over in a clash with his father. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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Fear of Falling Short — Ryder admits he feels inadequate, fears he may not get into college, and feels lost about his future. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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Recognizing His Feelings — Ryder recognizes he pursued someone who did not love him while overlooking a longtime friend's care. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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Father's Apology — Ryder's father apologizes, explains his intentions, and reassures Ryder of his love. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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Reconciliation — Ryder accepts his father's apology and they reconcile. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
A Memorial Close
Principal Hagerson complains about the school and the people who make his job difficult. The closing moments show Jordan Oliver's yearbook memorial page and the remark that Jordan would be proud.
Key Events
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Reconciliation — Ryder accepts his father's apology and they reconcile. Characters: Ryder Jensen
Location: Home
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Principal's Complaint — Principal Hagerson complains about the school and the people who make his job difficult. Characters: Principal Hagerson
Location: School
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Yearbook Memorial — Ryder is shown Jordan Oliver's memorial page, and someone says Jordan would be proud. Characters: Ryder Jensen, Jordan Oliver
Location: Unspecified