Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Restless Signs and Old Fears
The young man recalls his lonely life, his work in a pastry costume, and his passion for walking on stilts. Strange notebook messages lead him to recognize his sleepwalking, while the nearby cemetery fuels thoughts about crossing between life and death.
Key Events
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A Lonely Ordinary Life — The young man recalls his lonely life before meeting Elvira.
Location: Unspecified
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Pastry Costume Work — He works wearing a pastry costume.
Location: Unspecified workplace
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Walking on Stilts — He walks on stilts, a childhood passion encouraged by his father.
Location: Unspecified
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Messages in the Notebook — Strange messages in his notebook make him think his father returns at night.
Location: Unspecified
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Sleepwalking Realization — He eventually realizes that he has been sleepwalking.
Location: Unspecified
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Near the Cemetery — Living near a cemetery, he imagines crossing between the living and the dead.
Location: Near a cemetery
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Fear of No Return — He wonders whether one day he might be unable to return from that imagined border.
Location: Near a cemetery
Elvira's Lessons in Desire
Elvira changes his life by teaching him restraint, attention to his partner, and unfamiliar practices. He takes these lessons seriously, even as his mother's concern about his condoms adds a domestic counterpoint.
Key Events
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Fear of No Return — He wonders whether one day he might be unable to return from that imagined border.
Location: Near a cemetery
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Meeting Elvira — Elvira enters his life and introduces an unconventional approach to love. Characters: Elvira
Location: Unspecified
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A Lesson in Restraint — Elvira teaches him to control climax and conserve sexual energy. Characters: Elvira
Location: Unspecified
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Attention to His Partner — Her instruction emphasizes focusing on satisfying his partner. Characters: Elvira
Location: Unspecified
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Unfamiliar Practices — Elvira guides him through unfamiliar positions and practices. Characters: Elvira
Location: Unspecified
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His Mother's Concern — His mother worries about his growing collection of condoms.
Location: Unspecified
Journeys Beyond the Ordinary
He confides that intimacy with Elvira seems to take him briefly to distant cities. Suspecting that climax ends the journeys, he begins to treat sexual energy as a way to prolong them.
Key Events
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His Mother's Concern — His mother worries about his growing collection of condoms.
Location: Unspecified
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A Remarkable Confession — He tells a friend that intimacy with Elvira seems to transport him to distant cities.
Location: Unspecified
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Climax Ends the Journeys — He suspects that climax ends the brief journeys he experiences during sex with Elvira. Characters: Elvira
Location: Unspecified
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Ana's Hardware Store — Ana, the hardware-store owner, recalls her connection to his father. Characters: Ana
Location: Hardware store
Ana's Memories of the Past
Ana recalls becoming a sleepwalker after the young man's father's death. Her account of their secret romance, exchanged letters, and his choice of family reveals a hidden side of his father's life.
Key Events
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Ana's Sleepwalking — Ana says she became a sleepwalker after his father's death. Characters: Ana
Location: Unspecified
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Secret Letters — Ana remembers her secret relationship with his father and their exchanged letters. Characters: Ana
Location: Unspecified
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A Hidden Romance Ends — Ana recalls that his father chose his family and later burned the letters. Characters: Ana
Location: Unspecified
An Unfinished Experiment
The young man reports reaching places such as Venice during intimacy with Elvira. He continues trying to delay climax and extend the journeys, but the available events leave the result unresolved.
Key Events
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Journeys to Venice — He reports reaching places such as Venice during intimacy with Elvira. Characters: Elvira
Location: Venice, as experienced in his vision
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The Experiment Continues — He tries to delay climax and extend the journeys; the outcome remains unresolved. Characters: Elvira
Location: Unspecified