Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Training and Burtech's Secret
David remains focused on defeating Dante while John encourages him to take a break. At Burtech, Burroughs learns about Cameron's lifelike computer-data clones and moves samples into the LA Grid.
Key Events
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David Trains Against Dante — David repeatedly challenges Dante but cannot beat him at the highest level. Characters: David Quarry, Dante
Location: Virtual fighting system
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John Urges a Break — John urges David to stop training and enjoy virtual entertainment. Characters: David Quarry, John Gibson
Location: Virtual entertainment area
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Burroughs Learns of the Clones — Burroughs learns Cameron has created lifelike beings from cloned computer data. Characters: Burroughs, Dr. Cameron
Location: Burtech Industries
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Pain Device Enforces Obedience — Burroughs uses a device that causes pain and deterioration to control virtual beings. Characters: Burroughs
Location: Burtech facility
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Samples Enter the LA Grid — Burroughs orders two samples transported into the LA Grid. Characters: Burroughs
Location: Los Angeles Grid
A Death and a Break
John is killed while pursuing illegal crossers, and David doubts that the official investigation will be trustworthy. After clashes with Doyle over procedure, David resigns to pursue the case independently.
Key Events
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John Is Killed — John is killed while pursuing three people who crossed illegally into the LA Grid. Characters: John Gibson
Location: Los Angeles Grid
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Doyle Orders Procedure — Doyle tells David to follow procedure and later warns him against acting without approval. Characters: David Quarry, A.C. Doyle
Location: Department
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David Resigns to Investigate — Suspecting the investigation will be compromised, David resigns and pursues the case. Characters: David Quarry
Location: Department
Fugitives and the Mainframe
David discovers that Liana and Greta are among the fugitives connected to Burtech. Liana warns him that Dante is trying to reach the Mainframe, while David and Liana evade Burtech's pursuers.
Key Events
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Fugitives Identified — David discovers that Liana and Greta are among the fugitives connected to Burtech. Characters: David Quarry, Liana, Greta
Location: Los Angeles Grid
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Liana Warns of Dante — Liana warns David that Dante is loose and trying to reach the Mainframe. Characters: David Quarry, Liana, Dante
Location: Los Angeles Grid
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Escape from Burtech Pursuers — David and Liana evade Burtech's pursuers as Burroughs seeks to recapture her. Characters: David Quarry, Liana, Burroughs
Location: Los Angeles Grid
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Burroughs Orders Lethal Force — Burroughs orders other virtual characters to kill anyone who interferes. Characters: Burroughs
Location: Burtech facility
The Investigation Goes Alone
David connects Cameron's cloning work to a danger beyond John's death, but Doyle refuses to move against Burroughs without stronger evidence. David breaks contact with the department, retrieves Doyle's handprint through Mary's access system, and continues on his own as the central threats remain unresolved.
Key Events
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David Understands the Threat — David learns about Cameron's cloning experiments and recognizes a threat beyond one murder. Characters: David Quarry, Dr. Cameron
Location: Los Angeles Grid
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Doyle Refuses to Act — Doyle refuses action against Burroughs without stronger evidence and directs David to federal authorities. Characters: David Quarry, A.C. Doyle, Burroughs
Location: Department
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David Retrieves Doyle's Handprint — David uses Mary's access system to retrieve Doyle's handprint after breaking contact with the department. Characters: David Quarry, A.C. Doyle
Location: Access system
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David Continues Alone — David continues acting alone while Dante's Mainframe attempt and Burroughs's operation remain unresolved. Characters: David Quarry, Dante, Burroughs
Location: Los Angeles Grid