Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Shore Leave Goes Wrong
The sailors return from Korea expecting freedom but face financial problems after gambling losses. A reckless trip to an off-limits bar ends with them drugged and robbed.
Key Events
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Return From Korea — Three petty officers return from Korea and begin long-awaited shore leave. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: California harbor
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Gambling Losses — Joe and Skip have no money after losing it in a crap game. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: Battle cruiser
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Money Borrowed Again — Joe and Skip beg their wealthy shipmate for money once again. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: California harbor
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Illegal Bar Detour — The sailors are taken to an off-limits bar despite one sailor's reluctance. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: Off-limits clip joint
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Drugged And Robbed — Bargirls and a bartender drug and rob the sailors of their money. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: Clip joint bar
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A Guilty Awakening — Joe wakes broke and guilty, determined to repair the situation. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: California shore
Schemes On Catalina
Joe devises a way to reach Santa Catalina through work and improvised financing. Dancing, temporary lodging, and night-club labor create a fragile opportunity for the sailors.
Key Events
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A Guilty Awakening — Joe wakes broke and guilty, determined to repair the situation. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: California shore
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Passage To Catalina — Joe arranges passage and spending money in exchange for shipboard work. Characters: Joe Carter
Location: California harbor
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Dance For Tips — Skip joins an impromptu dance session that earns money from passengers. Characters: Skip Edwards
Location: Passenger boat
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Trailer Park Shelter — Skip brings the group to a trailer park where limited lodging becomes available. Characters: Skip Edwards, Nancy Flynn
Location: Trailer park
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Nancy Meets Skip — Nancy hits the sailor with a horseshoe, creating their first memorable encounter. Characters: Skip Edwards, Nancy Flynn
Location: Trailer park
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Second Day Scheme — The sailors arrange more money and food through night-club work. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: Night club
Loneliness By The Sea
Cabin confusion and social exclusion leave one sailor discouraged on the island. He decides to return to the mainland, but a disabled motorboat changes his course.
Key Events
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Second Day Scheme — The sailors arrange more money and food through night-club work. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: Night club
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Cabin Confusion — One sailor enters the wrong cabin and unsuccessfully hides from its residents. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: Trailer park cabins
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Beach Exclusion — The unwanted sailor feels out of place while his shipmates enjoy the beach. Characters: Skip Edwards, Nancy Flynn
Location: Santa Catalina beach
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Return To Mainland — The dejected sailor decides to leave the island and waits for the next ship. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards
Location: Avalon dock
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Disabled Motorboat — Jane's motorboat fails, and the sailor attempts to repair its engine. Characters: Jane Stanton
Location: Avalon harbor
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Welcome Aboard — Jane brings the sailor aboard her father's yacht so his uniform can dry. Characters: Jane Stanton, Commodore Stanton
Location: Commodore Stanton's yacht
Courage In Open Water
Jane's boat fails again and throws both passengers into the water. The sailor rescues Jane and uses his navigation skills to guide them safely back to Avalon.
Key Events
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Welcome Aboard — Jane brings the sailor aboard her father's yacht so his uniform can dry. Characters: Jane Stanton, Commodore Stanton
Location: Commodore Stanton's yacht
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Second Boat Failure — The motorboat fails again, throwing Jane and the sailor into the water. Characters: Jane Stanton
Location: Open water
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Rescue At Sea — The sailor saves Jane, who cannot swim, and navigates them back to safety. Characters: Jane Stanton
Location: Open water near Avalon
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Commodore's Celebration — The grateful Commodore throws a party honoring the sailor's courage. Characters: Jane Stanton, Commodore Stanton
Location: Commodore Stanton's yacht
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Servants' Reversal — Sheriff Billings delivers Joe and Skip to serve as attendants at the party. Characters: Joe Carter, Skip Edwards, Jane Stanton, Commodore Stanton, Sheriff Billings
Location: Commodore Stanton's party