Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Cost of a Missed Chance
Nick's Vapoorize invention succeeds after Tim dismisses the idea and misses the chance to invest. Nick's growing wealth intensifies Tim's envy and draws scrutiny to Natalie's campaign.
Key Events
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Tim and Nick at 3M — Best friends, neighbors, and co-workers share a life before Nick's invention changes their fortunes. Characters: Tim Dingman, Nick Vanderpark
Location: 3M
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Vapoorize Is Invented — Nick invents a spray that instantly disintegrates dog feces. Characters: Nick Vanderpark, Tim Dingman
Location: Not specified
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Tim Misses the Investment — Tim had scoffed at Nick's idea and passed up the chance to invest. Characters: Tim Dingman, Nick Vanderpark
Location: Not specified
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Nick Becomes Wealthy — Vapoorize succeeds, bringing Nick substantial wealth and intensifying Tim's envy. Characters: Nick Vanderpark, Tim Dingman
Location: Not specified
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Natalie Faces Campaign Questions — Natalie's state senate campaign is repeatedly questioned about Nick's product. Characters: Natalie Vanderpark, Nick Vanderpark
Location: Not specified
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Tim Loses His Job — Tim is fired from 3M as his envy and personal troubles worsen. Characters: Tim Dingman
Location: 3M
A Friendship Put at Risk
Tim loses his job and his family temporarily leaves. He meets J-Man, then accidentally shoots Corky and hides the horse's body.
Key Events
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Tim Loses His Job — Tim is fired from 3M as his envy and personal troubles worsen. Characters: Tim Dingman
Location: 3M
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Debbie Leaves Temporarily — Debbie and the children temporarily leave Tim. Characters: Tim Dingman, Debbie Dingman, Lula Dingman
Location: Not specified
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Tim Meets J-Man — Tim meets J-Man, who listens sympathetically and offers advice. Characters: Tim Dingman, J-Man
Location: Bar
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Corky Is Shot — After a drunken night, Tim accidentally shoots Nick's horse Corky with an arrow. Characters: Tim Dingman, Nick Vanderpark
Location: Not specified
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The Horse Is Buried — Tim buries Corky's body in his abandoned swimming pool. Characters: Tim Dingman
Location: Tim's abandoned swimming pool
The Reward Scheme Unravels
Nick offers a reward for Corky's return, and Tim and J-Man plan to claim it by pretending to find the horse. The family becomes caught up in the complications, and the carcass is lost in a rainstorm.
Key Events
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Nick Offers a Reward — Nick offers $50,000 for the return of Corky. Characters: Nick Vanderpark
Location: Not specified
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Reward Scheme Is Planned — Tim and J-Man plan for J-Man to find the horse and split the reward. Characters: Tim Dingman, J-Man
Location: Not specified
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Family Stays at Cabin — Tim's family becomes holed up at J-Man's cabin during the horse-cover-up complications. Characters: Tim Dingman, Debbie Dingman, Lula Dingman, J-Man
Location: J-Man's mountain cabin
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Carcass Lost in Storm — A rainstorm causes the horse's carcass to be lost. Characters: Tim Dingman, J-Man
Location: Not specified
Wealth, Blackmail, and Confession
Nick offers Tim an equal partnership, which makes J-Man feel betrayed and prompts his blackmail attempt. Tim accidentally shoots J-Man with an arrow, then confesses everything to Nick and receives forgiveness.
Key Events
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Nick Offers Partnership — Nick invites Tim to join him in a 50/50 partnership for Vapoorize's Rome debut. Characters: Nick Vanderpark, Tim Dingman
Location: Not specified
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J-Man Demands a Share — J-Man learns Tim is wealthy, attempts blackmail, and demands a partnership; Tim accidentally shoots him with an arrow. Characters: Tim Dingman, J-Man
Location: Not specified
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Tim Confesses to Nick — Tim tells Nick everything, including his jealousy, and Nick forgives him. Characters: Tim Dingman, Nick Vanderpark
Location: Not specified
The Truth and a New Invention
Corky's body resurfaces during Natalie's campaign event, and the post-mortem links his death to Vapoorize by-product. The product is pulled from the market, but Tim develops Pocket Flan and J-Man appears at its infomercial.
Key Events
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Corky Reappears — Corky's body floats down a nearby river during Natalie's campaign press conference. Characters: Tim Dingman, Nick Vanderpark, Natalie Vanderpark
Location: Near Natalie's campaign press conference
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Vapoorize Is Linked to Poisoning — The post-mortem finds Vapoorize by-product poisoned Corky; the veterinarian must notify the EPA. Characters: Tim Dingman, Nick Vanderpark, Natalie Vanderpark
Location: Not specified
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Pocket Flan Offers a Restart — After Vapoorize is pulled from the market, Tim invents Pocket Flan; J-Man appears in the audience, apparently reconciled. Characters: Tim Dingman, Nick Vanderpark, J-Man
Location: Pocket Flan infomercial